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noWizardme
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Apr 21 2013, 10:24am

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Feanor, monkey paw, Macbeth [In reply to] Can't Post

I was thinking- when a storyteller "foregrounds" an oath, wish-generating mechanism or prophecy like this, it really signals things to the audience.

Difficult to make it turn out unimportant (Macbeths witches just turn out to be in error; or someone makes wise wishes then lives happily ever after)
Boring if it all turns out predictably (you get the late Star Wars films)
So it almost has to turn out "tricksy".

The storyteller can also make use of the audience realising this while the characters don't ...

Disclaimers: The words of noWizardme may stand on their heads! I'm often wrong about things, and its fun to be taught more....

"nowimë I am in the West, and by other names in other lands. Mostly they just say 'Oh no it's him - look busy!' "


CuriousG
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Apr 21 2013, 6:50pm

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RL-Finwe commented that this is a pivotal chapter for the whole book, which means I could ask a million what if's, but showing some restraint, I'll limit myself to:

1. What if Feanor had consented to surrender the Silmarils to revive the Trees? Would he have still pursued Morgoth to Beleriand when he learned that the Silmarils were stolen and book-Finwe was dead?

2. What if Morgoth and Ungoliant succeeded in killing the Trees but were captured before leaving Aman? What would their punishment be?

3. What if the Balrogs didn't rescue Morgoth--could Ungoliant have swallowed him? If so, would she gain all his powers?

4. What if the Teleri grudgingly agreed to transport the Noldor to Beleriand and returned home with no ships burnt, no Kinslaying, no crossing of the Helcaraxe. Would we by sympathetic to Feanor then? Would the Curse of Mandos have happened? If so, would it seem fair, or petty vindictiveness?


noWizardme
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Apr 21 2013, 7:27pm

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What if Feanor and sons set out as knights errant on a quest to revenge Finwe, not dragging their whole people along? // [In reply to] Can't Post

 

Disclaimers: The words of noWizardme may stand on their heads! I'm often wrong about things, and its fun to be taught more....

"nowimë I am in the West, and by other names in other lands. Mostly they just say 'Oh no it's him - look busy!' "


Brethil
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Apr 21 2013, 8:02pm

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**rubbing hands** meaty questions.....! [In reply to] Can't Post


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RL-Finwe commented that this is a pivotal chapter for the whole book, which means I could ask a million what if's, but showing some restraint, I'll limit myself to: Admirable restraint CG....!

1. What if Feanor had consented to surrender the Silmarils to revive the Trees? Would he have still pursued Morgoth to Beleriand when he learned that the Silmarils were stolen and book-Finwe was dead? I think if he was capable of surrendering them - no. But he wasn't, and don't see without an epiphany how he would ever be. If he was at that spot in life, where he could say goodbye to the Silmarils and get past his fear, anger and possessiveness, I think he might have appropriately mourned Finwe but not pursued Morgoth. Or if he did, more justice-seeking than blind-eyed with rage. He might have let the Valar take action instead of spawning the Oath. Again - this all presumes an epiphany, which didn't happen.

2. What if Morgoth and Ungoliant succeeded in killing the Trees but were captured before leaving Aman? What would their punishment be? Knowing the Valar - chains and solitary. Like that worked out so well.

3. What if the Balrogs didn't rescue Morgoth--could Ungoliant have swallowed him? If so, would she gain all his powers? Definitely, she could have - but would his spirit just shift out and bolt? I don't think consumption would equal power gain; and do the Valar have any actual physical bodymass? It is referred to by JRRT as 'clothing' that can be changed - is it flesh? I am not sure that it is.

4. What if the Teleri grudgingly agreed to transport the Noldor to Beleriand and returned home with no ships burnt, no Kinslaying, no crossing of the Helcaraxe. Would we by sympathetic to Feanor then? Would the Curse of Mandos have happened? If so, would it seem fair, or petty vindictiveness? We probably would feel much more sympathetic towards Feanor, as the son of a murdered father, seeking justice. The curse may yet have happened - depends on how things went.


Manwe, when asked a simple "Yes" or "No" question, contemplated, and responded "the middle one."


noWizardme
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Apr 21 2013, 8:02pm

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I originally suggested an "any other business" thread - do we need it? [In reply to] Can't Post

Does anyone have any points to raise which have not fitted in so far?

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"nowimë I am in the West, and by other names in other lands. Mostly they just say 'Oh no it's him - look busy!' "


Brethil
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Apr 21 2013, 8:05pm

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Feanor and sons as knights... [In reply to] Can't Post

I think it would be a much more sympathetic angle, if they did that - WITHOUT the Oath. With the Oath it is still a bit of a smack in the chops to the Valar, and the rest of the Firstborn regardless. Without the Oath, and without dragging along the Noldor en masse - probably very sympathetic angle.

Manwe, when asked a simple "Yes" or "No" question, contemplated, and responded "the middle one."


noWizardme
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Apr 21 2013, 8:11pm

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Oathless knights... Much nicer [In reply to] Can't Post

Off go Feanor & Sons like Sir Gawain. Bound by honour to a seemingly hopeless quest (Sir G has a faithful horse, Gringolet, btw for equine interest). How noble. But it has to be volunteers (and faithful steeds) only.

Disclaimers: The words of noWizardme may stand on their heads! I'm often wrong about things, and its fun to be taught more....

"nowimë I am in the West, and by other names in other lands. Mostly they just say 'Oh no it's him - look busy!' "


CuriousG
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Apr 21 2013, 9:42pm

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Nicer but dead much sooner, if it was just 8 of them vs. Morgoth. // [In reply to] Can't Post

 


CuriousG
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Apr 21 2013, 9:56pm

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Yes, Feanor seems doomed no matter what the what if is [In reply to] Can't Post

 
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2. What if Morgoth and Ungoliant succeeded in killing the Trees but were captured before leaving Aman? What would their punishment be? Knowing the Valar - chains and solitary. Like that worked out so well.
You seem to share my skepticism on the Valar handling that penal situation and rehabilitation very well.



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3. What if the Balrogs didn't rescue Morgoth--could Ungoliant have swallowed him? If so, would she gain all his powers? Definitely, she could have - but would his spirit just shift out and bolt? I don't think consumption would equal power gain; and do the Valar have any actual physical bodymass? It is referred to by JRRT as 'clothing' that can be changed - is it flesh? I am not sure that it is.

That's what I'm trying to figure out--you can't "eat" a spirit, can you, even if you're Ungoliant? Though losing a body makes an Ainu weaker, as Sauron would tell us if we asked him, so Morgoth couldn't just laugh it off if she did eat him.

As for power gain, I also tend to think she wouldn't absorb his powers, but she grew greater from eating the gems he was feeding her, so wouldn't she grow greater from eating him too? Or does it just not work that way? We need a Tolkieno-biologist to answer that one, I guess. As Morgoth needs a specialist for his new-found arachnophobia.


CuriousG
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Apr 21 2013, 10:56pm

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The Oath in full [In reply to] Can't Post

As usual, consulting Arda Reconstructed is the last thing I think of. Here are a couple of gems:

1. Feanor's sons were at Formenos when Morgoth attacked it, and they are the messengers who bring the news to him. Finwe's death is pretty graphic, "with his head 'crushed as with a great mace of iron' and his sword 'twisted and untempered as if by a lightning-stroke.' "

2. Here's the full Oath in verse form. As Kane says, "The actual words of the oath ooze power and dread..." It's too bad it wasn't included:

Be he foe or friend, be he foul or clean,
brood of Morgoth or bright Vala,
Elda or Maia or Aftercomer,
Man yet unborn upon Middle-earth,
neither law, nor love, nor league of swords,
dread nor danger, not Doom itself,
shall defend him from Feanor, and Feanor's kin,
whoso hideth or hoardeth, or in hand taketh,
finding keepeth or afar casteth
a Silmaril. This we swear all:
death we will deal him ere Day's ending,
woe unto world's end! Our word hear thou,
Eru Allfather! To the everlasting
Darkness doom us if our deed faileth.
On the holy mountain hear in witness
and our vow remember, Manwe and Varda!


Since I'm not an oath-making kind of guy myself, I don't totally understand why I would ask God/gods to punish me for failing to do what I set out to do. I think the failure would be punishment enough. I probably wouldn't have fit in very well at Feanorian family festivities where people made small talk about what they were up to.

It's a bit odd that they would invoke the names of Manwe and Varda after rebelling against them and saying they were irrelevant.


Brethil
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Apr 22 2013, 12:13am

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Since I'm not an oath-making kind of guy myself, I don't totally understand why I would ask God/gods to punish me for failing to do what I set out to do. I think the failure would be punishment enough. I probably wouldn't have fit in very well at Feanorian family festivities where people made small talk about what they were up to.

It's a bit odd that they would invoke the names of Manwe and Varda after rebelling against them and saying they were irrelevant.




Wow, nice find CG. Very powerful stuff.

I think the call down for punishment is to seal his sons to him and the Oath, in case they see fit to falter. And I feel like naming Varda and Manwe is pure defiance, as in "yeah, I said it..."

As for the Rehabilitation Philosophy of the Valar - could have been managed better, and I feel like they would just repeat what they has done before, sort of *one-trick pony*. It took so much before the punishment fit the crimes; so I share your skepticism indeed CG.

Manwe, when asked a simple "Yes" or "No" question, contemplated, and responded "the middle one."


CuriousG
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Apr 22 2013, 12:25am

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And I feel like naming Varda and Manwe is pure defiance, as in "yeah, I said it..."


Thanks for clarifying, Brethil. I get it now. Not naming them as guarantors of the oath like Eru is, but more of a taunt. Feanor & family never miss a chance to rub someone the wrong way.


elostirion74
Rohan

Apr 22 2013, 6:04am

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  1. Oaths - why do F�anor and his sons swear such a dramatic one? How is it like/unlike other oaths from Tolkien�s stories, (or his influences)

Being so inflamed with hatred and vengeance as Fëanor is at this moment, he is ready for exactly this kind of destructive behaviour. This oath doesn't really compare to any other oath in Tolkien's stories, since other oaths in his stories are usually more about fulfilling bonds of friendship and allegiance (cf. Eorl's oath to the steward of Gondor and Finrod's to Barahir). This oath is filled with such hatred and such foolhardy blasphemy that it works as perhaps the main driving force behind the fall of the Noldor and the other Elven realms in Beleriand.

  1. What is driving the Noldor on

I like the realism of finding so many different and sometimes conflicting motivations among the Noldor. Some are about a sense of adventure or seeking glory/power, others come out of loyalty or because their friends go, and some go out of a sense of duty to their people, not wanting them to be subject to the rash councels of Fëanor.


3. Could the Valar be handling things better? What is motivating them? Are we discovering things about their relationship with the elves, or the limitations of their project to partition Arda and bring the Children of Illuvatar to the nice bit?
I'm partial to the idea that the Valar have idealized The Elves too much. And this pattern of behaviour is not so surprising after all when you think of the fact that many among the Ainur were drawn to the world out of love and curiosity, looking at the gifts of Ilúvatar's children and what wonders they could make and achieve. Most of the Valar had probably not truly contemplated the backside of the coin and the consequences of the possible negative aspects of the gifts of the Elves.
When it comes to Manwë and his decisions, I think I would rather ask myself. What quality does he have that has made him the head of the Valar? What kind of leader is he? Manwë is the head of the Valar because he understands Eru's will and thoughts concerning the world better than any other among them, he's a spiritual leader. He is more of a strategic leader who doesn't rush into action to prove that he is doing something, nor does he try to force anyone. He is more a kind of leader who takes some major steps based on careful thinking and calculation, which we will see in chapter 11.





noWizardme
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Apr 22 2013, 1:49pm

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Disclaimers: The words of noWizardme may stand on their heads! I'm often wrong about things, and its fun to be taught more....

"nowimë I am in the West, and by other names in other lands. Mostly they just say 'Oh no it's him - look busy!' "


Finwe
Lorien


Apr 22 2013, 2:20pm

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Chapter 10 is up [In reply to] Can't Post

http://newboards.theonering.net/forum/gforum/perl/gforum.cgi?post=597304;

As three great Jewels they were in form. But not until the End, when Fëanor shall return who perished ere the Sun was made, and sits now in the Halls of Awaiting and comes no more among his kin; not until the Sun passes and the Moon falls, shall it be known of what substance they were made. Like the crystal of diamonds it appeared, and yet was more strong than adamant, so that no violence could mar it or break it within the Kingdom of Arda.


sador
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Apr 22 2013, 3:58pm

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Voronwe raised this question on the last time we've discussed this chapter. [In reply to] Can't Post

Opinions varied - I personally wasn't as impressed as some others with the Oath in this form, and squire was particularly scathing (but see FarFromHome's rebuttal to his arguments).
I tend to agree that the switch from latinate to Anglo-Saxon forms is a bit odd, especially as we see Feanor using poetic prose with great vigour and power later "Fair shall the end be..." without resorting to the kind of language squire condemns; it is possible that Christopher (who is a mediaevelist after all, which neither FFH, squire or Voronwe is) also felt this form of the Oath was still not up to par - or even that he personally knew his father was dissatisfied with it.

Another consideration to be taken is that the Silmarillion is nearly poetry-free - there are only two bits taken from the Lay of Leithan in Of Beren and Luthien. As far as I remember, Christopher attributes their insertion to Guy Kay. I also got the impression that they worked on the published Sil linearly - which means that as far as they knew at the moment, the Silmarillion was to be poetry-free. I think they could have rewritten the Oath as prose and remain within the limits of editorial privilege they took (and would possibly do a better job of it than squire did); but either they felt recasting JRRT's draft would shed off some of its power, or else they really didn't admire it.

Personally, I think the short summary works for me. It contains all the elements, and allows the reader to imagine any really powerful words, such as modern English fails to properly convey. I think something more Biblical would be in place; and the Greeks and Roman had some pretty awful oaths of their own.

Anyway, just for the sake of comparison, in HoME III, ps. 134-135 an early version of the Oaths (plural!) is reproduced, from the abandoned poem The Flight of the Noldoli, which Christopher dates to 1925:

Feanor vows:

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...I swear here oaths,
unbreakable bonds / to bind me ever
by Timbrething / and the timeless halls
of Bredhil the Blessed / that abides thereon -
may she hear and heed - / to hunt endlessly
unwearying unwavering / through world and sea,
through unleagured lands, / lonely mountains,
over fens and forest / and the fearful snows,
till I find those fair ones, / where the fate is hid
of the folk of Elfland / and their fortune locked,
where alone now lies / the light divine.


It is really fascinting that Feanor names as witness only Varda (Bredhil), who has hallowed the Silmarils. He also swears by Taniquetil (Timbrething), as in the later versions.

A lot of the text CuriousG copied here, is based upon the oath of Feanor's sons:

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Be he friend or foe / or foul offspring
of Morgoth Bauglir, / be he mortal dark
that in after days / on earth shall dwell,
shall no law nor love / nor league of Gods,
no might nor mercy, / not moveless fate,
defend him for ever / from the fiery vengeance
of the sons of Feanor, / whoso sieze or steal
or finding keep / the fair enchanted
globes of crystal / whose glory dies not,
the Silmarils. / We have sworn for ever!


Once again, neither Manwe nor Eru is named.
After that, the whole host replies with assent, ending with "You vows are ours!", and the poem is broken of. However, according to this version most (or at least, many) of the Noldoli were bound by the same oath.
I think the phrasing of the later version of oath fits well with the style of the early ones; but I'm not sure it works in the context of chapter 9 of the published Silmarillion.


noWizardme
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Apr 22 2013, 4:11pm

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What I keep meaning to do.... [In reply to] Can't Post

What I keep meaning to do when I've "hosted" a chapter is to let the discussion run where it will, but then go back and compare it with earlier passes the Reading Room has made at the Chapter. That way we can enjoy both a fresh discussion AND also re-appreciate the good stuff from the last effort. At the end of the discussion is the time to do it, lest the current Fellowship of the Room feel daunted by the task of bettering their predecessors!

But by the end, I'm usually feeling a bit chaptered out. So many thanks for this summary and links!!

Disclaimers: The words of noWizardme may stand on their heads! I'm often wrong about things, and its fun to be taught more....

"nowimë I am in the West, and by other names in other lands. Mostly they just say 'Oh no it's him - look busy!' "


(This post was edited by noWizardme on Apr 22 2013, 4:12pm)


elostirion74
Rohan

Apr 22 2013, 6:56pm

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some objections to the criticism against the Valar and Manwë [In reply to] Can't Post

I agree that the Valar lack the full understanding of the internal workings of the Noldor, but I think the Valar actually deserve more credit than most of the posters here are willing to give them and their understanding of the internal workings of the Noldor are based on a fairly consistent idea about the relation between the Elves and themselves.

The Valar invited the Noldor to come to Valinor of their own free will, and if they want to depart they are equally free to do so. While they are staying in Valinor, the Elves are also allowed to govern their own affairs, without having the Valar interfering in their affairs, as long as the Elves don't openly threaten each other or show similar signs of hostility. This actually ties in with Tolkien's idea of self-government; that each people or group of families should be free to govern themselves without a big degree of centralized control or interference.

The Valar wanted the company of the Elves, being drawn to them and their "otherness", their gifts and how they reminded them of the will of Ilúvatar and his underlying ideas for the creation of Arda/Eä. They feel wounded that they are accused of holding the Elves captive in the same way that someone feels wounded when their good intentions seem wilfully misunderstood. At the same time they can just as well believe that the Noldor should be free to make their own decisions by discussing things between themselves and count on the more cautious ones among the Noldor to persuade the majority of their people to arrive at the right conclusion (seen from the Valar's point of view). And although they are proven wrong as to the result of the discussion, it's only fair to say that the Noldor seem to be very divided in these matters and only resolve to follow Fëanor after a long debate. When they decide to leave, the majority don't accept Fëanor as their leader either, so the Valar haven't miscalculated the situation entirely. They have underestimated the power of Fëanor's words on the minds of the Noldor and the strengths of the bonds of loyalty between different parts of the Noldor, but they haven't underestimated the level of support Fëanor has a leader.

Having the Valar sending a herald to speak against leaving too early would in my opinion only play into Fëanor's reasoning that the Valar are trying to stop or hinder their journey and keep them captive, so I think Manwë's decision is based on fairly sensible judgements when he decides to wait. And when he makes decisions, they tend to be rather big strategic decisions rather than immediate measures and short term solutions, see chapter 11. His problem at the point in the story we're talking about now is partly that the Valar have not quite decided what to do about their problems; there is little help in previous knowledge and several uncertain factors to consider. When he eventually sends his herald, he tries to warn the Noldor as well as correct their accusations, which is actually all he can do at the moment, since he lacks any concrete plans of action he can propose.


Brethil
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Apr 23 2013, 1:25am

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You make some eloquent points here Elostirion; some thoughts in return [In reply to] Can't Post


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I agree that the Valar lack the full understanding of the internal workings of the Noldor, but I think the Valar actually deserve more credit than most of the posters here are willing to give them and their understanding of the internal workings of the Noldor are based on a fairly consistent idea about the relation between the Elves and themselves. The Valar invited the Noldor to come to Valinor of their own free will, and if they want to depart they are equally free to do so. While they are staying in Valinor, the Elves are also allowed to govern their own affairs, without having the Valar interfering in their affairs, as long as the Elves don't openly threaten each other or show similar signs of hostility. This actually ties in with Tolkien's idea of self-government; that each people or group of families should be free to govern themselves without a big degree of centralized control or interference. Was it the wisest choice though - for the Elves? The Valar that seemed to know the world of Arda best, Ulmo, argued for the Elves to remain in Arda and heal the land of its hurts, fulfilling their sub-creative purpose as the Children of Illuvatar. The Valar seem to decide to bring them to Valinor based on two things - their desire to have their companionship and to be near their beauty, and the fear that the Elves would not be able to fend adequately for themselves. So it is self serving in the first instance, and paternalistic in the second. The fact that the Elves had to be "convinced" and politicked into coming to Valinor I feel should have been an indicator that it was not a natural move. And think of the cost to the Elves - instead of perhaps supporting them in their independence and as stewards of Arda the call to Valinor causes the first Sundering of the Elves. (A bit of the road to Helcaraxe being paved with good intentions...! Heehee!)

The Valar wanted the company of the Elves, being drawn to them and their "otherness", their gifts and how they reminded them of the will of Ilúvatar and his underlying ideas for the creation of Arda/Eä. They feel wounded that they are accused of holding the Elves captive in the same way that someone feels wounded when their good intentions seem wilfully misunderstood. True, I like this description - but it speaks of the paternalism of the Valar to me. And if you are going to 'care for' someone in that sort of parental role, you must take on the responsibility to interact that way - not to sulk (which is what I feel like they do! I know it describes them being aggrieved.) At the same time they can just as well believe that the Noldor should be free to make their own decisions by discussing things between themselves and count on the more cautious ones among the Noldor to persuade the majority of their people to arrive at the right conclusion (seen from the Valar's point of view). Exactly! From their point of view...! On the other hand, maybe it points to a blossoming of wisdom in allowing the Firstborn more independence, but maybe its too little too late. And although they are proven wrong as to the result of the discussion, it's only fair to say that the Noldor seem to be very divided in these matters and only resolve to follow Fëanor after a long debate. When they decide to leave, the majority don't accept Fëanor as their leader either, so the Valar haven't miscalculated the situation entirely. They have underestimated the power of Fëanor's words on the minds of the Noldor and the strengths of the bonds of loyalty between different parts of the Noldor, but they haven't underestimated the level of support Fëanor has a leader. "A great multitude gathered swiftly, therefore, to hear what he would say; and the hill and all the stairs and streets that climbed upon it were lit with the light of many torches that each one bore in hand." I would say they greatly underestimated the level of dissent and the level of interest that is obviously widespread and appears excited to quickly gather. "And all the Noldor ... but one tithe refused to take the road." So about 90% follow Feanor (including those against their better judgment, like Fingolfin and Finarfin). What I feel is that the haste and heat in which everything was being done was so alien to the Valar that they could not see how powerful it was. It just makes me think that having the Firstborn there, with this lack of 'sameness' was not the best choice.

Having the Valar sending a herald to speak against leaving too early would in my opinion only play into Fëanor's reasoning that the Valar are trying to stop or hinder their journey and keep them captive, so I think Manwë's decision is based on fairly sensible judgements when he decides to wait. As above, I think it the Valar are taken aback at the heat and passion that the Elves have within them when kindled, and I just don't think they ever saw it being aimed at going SO against their own ideals and plans. And when he makes decisions, they tend to be rather big strategic decisions rather than immediate measures and short term solutions, see chapter 11. His problem at the point in the story we're talking about now is partly that the Valar have not quite decided what to do about their problems; there is little help in previous knowledge and several uncertain factors to consider. When he eventually sends his herald, he tries to warn the Noldor as well as correct their accusations, which is actually all he can do at the moment, since he lacks any concrete plans of action he can propose. I agree here that the unknowns were great in this case. This was unique in history to that point, and I think the Valar simply had no comparable experience to draw upon here, or had any idea of what might actually happen. Sadly the Message, when it comes, is so miscalculating of the Elven mind and loyalties that it only cements Feanor's leadership!


Manwe, when asked a simple "Yes" or "No" question, contemplated, and responded "the middle one."


noWizardme
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Apr 23 2013, 9:24am

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In the end, it all happens too fast...to manage "hasty" we need Treebeard, not Feanor... [In reply to] Can't Post

In the end, it all happens too fast. Now properly stirred up, the Noldor have become passionate and intemperate. Perhaps this isn't a side of them the Valar have seen much. Perhaps it isn't a feeling the Noldor have experienced themselves very much. Maybe this has never happened before! They're all floundering in a sea of hormones when they're used to calm debate.

Maybe the usual protocol, after the grand meeting rejects the idea of breaking the Silmarils to mend the Trees, is a short pause to brood silently over other options. Not unreasonably long - maybe only a week would pass before the next speaker felt ready to contribute: and what is a week to these immortals? Perhaps that explains what looks to us humans as a very strange passivity from the Valar leadership. Maybe they are behaving normally, but then suddenly, that time frame won't do at all.

One could contrast Feanor's leadership here with Treebeard's, leading the Ents against Saruman. Both need to fire up a people who are passionate, but usually passionate about something peaceful (e.g. gem-crafting or admiring spring blossom). It's a passion that is difficult to channel into violent action, but my word, there is plenty of energy to tap into if that does happen; way too much to harness easily. I think we are told more about Treebeard's thinking than Feanor's, so the following comparison might not be quite fair. But I imagine Feanor lacking Treebeard's ability to both get thoroughly riled and also to detach himself from his emotions and think clearly about what to do.

To elaborate on that - Treebeard arrives at Orthanc intending to allow the hotheads to throw themselves at it for a while, but he has a well-thought out Plan B (damming the Isen and flooding Saruman out) all ready when a simple surprise attack fails. He's also sent off a detachment to help at Helm's Deep and simultaneously to prevent Saruman's forces returning to Orthanc in order to save their headquarters. Sandhurst or West Point Officer Training Academies would approve, I think. It's also entirely plausible that Treebeard knows more about Gandalf's movements and intentions than he needs to explain to the hobbits, and so knows that there is a good chance of wizardly re-inforcements if the storming of Orthanc becomes a siege. Lastly, I think that both pent up fury and reason are telling the Ents that it's truly either Saruman or them: Either Orthanc must fall or Fangorn will be completely felled. So when they calm down, they stick with the project.

Contrast Feanor - he seems to be spending a lot of his energies just riding the emotional wave he's released (and being caught up in it himself). He knows he has to keep the elves riled up, before someone starts raising objections. He's temporarily welded together a coalition of interests - revenge on Morgoth! Lands and titles for all! - but it may not hold long. When they do stop being "hasty" a good proportion of the Noldor may start wondering how sane the project looks. He has to keep them bound by that other demagogue's trick "There Is No Alternative". And, lacking a long-term plan he's perfectly willing to play that No Alternative card, careless of the karmic debt he's piling up

Perhaps because of this, and perhaps because he's overwrought himself, Feanor's plans look improvised rather than calculated. He belatedly realizes he needs boats, and has left himself no plan but to get them from the Teleri, willing or no. As his hold over the Noldor fails, he has no better plan ready but to dump the factions he can no longer control, or fears he might lose soon. By the end of the chapter, he's managed to injure or annoy just about everyone, and is now landing in an unfamiliar land. (I think there is no reason to suppose the Noldor have much information about the political or military situation in Middle-earth when they finally arrive there.)

Disclaimers: The words of noWizardme may stand on their heads! I'm often wrong about things, and its fun to be taught more....

"nowimë I am in the West, and by other names in other lands. Mostly they just say 'Oh no it's him - look busy!' "


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sador
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Well, seeing that Finwe's thread of the next chapter is already up and active, it does make sense that I should finally answer your questions...
I'll try to be brief, but this might run over two different posts.

What on Earth possesses them to do something do extreme as this spectacular oath?
Vengeance, hate, desire for the Silmarils, feeling penned in Valinor - you name it. But they feel with Gimli, that sworn word can strengthen a quaking heart. (Which makes me wonder - was Elrond's rejoinder based upon his personal experience, knowing how Maglor's heart ultimately became sick of the Oath, and weary with its burden?)

Do we already sense as readers (remember “your first time” if you can) that this oath is going to backfire spectacularly?

I think we are supposed to assume so, that no good will come out of rebellion against the Valar. The Silmarillion is full of such foreshadowing.
On my first reading I was clueless, and the second came after reading the appendices to LotR. I expect most readers went through the LotR first - so this is not really surprising; it's like hearing the details of a heroic failure we knew of in general terms.


Should we contrast this with the great daring against seemingly hopeless odds of, say, the Rohirrim deciding to fulfill their oath to ride to the assistance of Gondor in Return of the King?
Not quite. The Rohirrim took their oath long before, and had benefitted greatly from their alliance with Gondor. It is only fitting that they fulfill their side of the deal when called to.
Feanor takes on Morgoth single-handedly, of his own volition.

Or is it more like the foolish - and most likely drunken - boast of Baldor son of Brego?
That was a wager, and a boast; Brego had no real need to go to the Paths of the Dead.
Feanor is justified in his wish to avenge his father and recover his treasure. It's just that the undertaking is too great for him which makes the oath so foolhardy, and its all-inclusive phrasing which drives him and his sons to recklessness, and ultimately to crime.

Are there interesting compare/contrasts to be done with other oaths from Tolkien's writings, or from other stories?
Faramir's "not if I found it by the highway would I take it", which he later says binds him as an oath.
But because he undertakes to do what Gandalf would want him to, we never realise how much like Brego's vow it is.

Or should we think of Elrond determined that the Fellowship of the Ring should **not** be bound by oath?
Oops! I've answered that before, missing that you've asked about it.

How is the oath "blasphemous"?

Swearing by Eru is pretty much so, isn't it?

What’s driving the Noldor? There’s a hard core (Fëanor & sons) bent on revenge and recovery of the Silmarils... What motivates the others?

They're fed up, and the Valinor experiment was clearly a failure.
They are a young people yet, and actually expect things to get better.

A further group are interested in the opportunities that might await in Middle-earth - for example Galadriel “was eager to be gone...she yearned to see the wide unguarded lands and rule there a realm at her own will.”
Yes. I've never understood why people consider Galadriel to be so holy and perfect, even if I admit that in his late writings, Tolkien himself seems to have thought so.
And the latest version, which makes her fight against her own people just because she doesn't like Feanor, and then escape with her Teleri lover to join them in Middle-earth, just makes the issue worse. But because people know that Feanor was wrong (which according to this version, she didn't!) they assume that anyone fighting against him was good and noble. Well, except for Gothmog.

Others are more reluctant. Fingolfin (Feanors step- brother) is in the classic moderate’s bind that “he would not be sundered from his people that were eager to go, nor leave them to the rash councils of Fëanor”.
Yes; but the real question is why he braved the Helcaraxe rather than admit failure and return, later in the chapter.

Meanwhile, what is motivating the Valar? Manwe is “aggrieved” to be accused of evil intent towards the Eldar, or of holding them captive.

Naturally.

And the Valar do not believe that Fëanor can hold the Noldor to his will.
They underestimate Fingolfin and Fingon, and do not realise the extent of disaffection among the Noldor.

Is there something of a teenager/parent confrontation here?
In a way; but here it's more complicated, with the Noldor denying such a parentage.

Do you agree/disagree with these analogies (or have others)?
Well, yes. It appears as if the Valar just wanted to chill off after their long labours in making Arda, or else were not quite sure what to do. They have clearly abandoned Middle-earth (as Feanor correctly says - "here was once light, that the Valar have begrudged Middle-earth"), and had failed to even guard their own interests.

Should the Valar have handled things differently? - e.g. revealed their plan, been conciliatory, taken steps to rebuild trust in their leadership?
Could they? Did they have a plan - or did they trust Eru's? Maybe it was Eru's plan for the Noldor to leave? The Valar have never really understood elves, and men even less.
Would being conciliatory help? I suspect it was too late for that.
Or to take another tack - could Manwe and Varda have disavowed the Oath? They were named as witnesses.

Ah well, time runs out. I'll return to this thread later, or tomorrow.





elostirion74
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Apr 23 2013, 11:37pm

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You make some very good points. Although I don´t always agree with the analogies you make, I like that you bring up and discuss the most important point - the decision of the Valar to bring the Elves to Aman.

I agree that the decision of the Valar to bring the Elves to Aman was not really well-founded and seemed a bit too self-serving. The Elves were clearly meant to fulfil the fate of the world, enriching it with their unique gifts and artistry, and this is not something they could do from Valinor. I don´t find the analogy with children and parents particularly fitting, though: the Valar look more to me like teachers and supervisors, but this is a role they could just as well fulfil in Middle Earth as in Aman.

I also agree with those who´ve said that the Valar have idealized the Elves and not taken into account the passions that can be kindled in them or the backside of the coin of the particular gifts of the Elves (pride, rivalry, possesiveness etc)

You´re probably right in judging that the haste in which things were done was alien to the Valar. But it´s more important to ask: what could they have done? Could they have done anything at all, taken conciliatory steps etc? And what could those steps have been?

You´re also right that they underestimated the level of discontent or uncertainty among the Noldor and the power of Fëanor´s words: I find his passionate speech interesting and worth looking at in itself. But I have trouble seeing what the Valar could have achieved by being present or having emissaries present, except perhaps express sympathy with the Noldor´s loss of their king.

Although the great majority of the Noldor leave, the greater part of those who leave follow Fingolfin and Finarfin and not Fëanor. Some of these, including Finarfin, decide to return to Tirion at a later stage in the journey.

I think it´s particularly interesting to look at why Fingolfin chooses to part from his brother to follow his hot-headed half-brother, even when the same half-brother abandons him to mortal danger and or humiliation. Is it pride? Stubbornness? A desire to prove himself to Fëanor and prove Fëanor wrong?


Brethil
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Apr 23 2013, 11:58pm

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I think it´s particularly interesting to look at why Fingolfin chooses to part from his brother to follow his hot-headed half-brother, even when the same half-brother abandons him to mortal danger and or humiliation. Is it pride? Stubbornness? A desire to prove himself to Fëanor and prove Fëanor wrong?




Such a complex family struggle here. It seems that the stone causing the avalanche is Finrod - we see him being "of like mind" with Galadriel in wanting to leave - her ambition being to rule her own space. So because of that it seems Fingolfin is unwillingly pulled in. Plus JRRT says "nor did he forget his words before the throne of Manwe." ('half-brother in blood, full brother in heart will I be. Thou shalt lead an I will follow...) Talk about an unexpected bargain to have to uphold!

And yes, I think it was also his desire not to leave his people at the mercy of Feanor - but he isn't happy certainly, his host lags in the back. If Finrod had changed his mind I think he would have happily bailed, and many of the Noldor with him as he was well-loved. But those younger Elves had their own reasons for going...so Fingolfin ends up in a very unhappy situation. So while I think going back is a cardinal "good'" thing, it isn't how I would have liked to see it happen.

As for the steps they could have taken - wow, good question. I thought about it for a while; I wonder if the best step they could have taken at some point - maybe while Melkor was still bound? And before things got out of hand - is escort the Elves back to Arda, making it a joyful thing and not a bad thing (?) and spend more time in Arda with them, getting them settled in and such...what do you think of that idea?

Manwe, when asked a simple "Yes" or "No" question, contemplated, and responded "the middle one."


sador
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Apr 24 2013, 7:17am

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This is actually a rewrite of the first form of the Oath, from the hardly-begun lay The Flight of the Noldoli. In it, Feanor names only Varda, which I interpret both as acknowledging her part in the Silmarils, and as stating that he is defying only Manwe, not her (compare to the Lament of Galadriel in Farewell to Lorien).

I guess the adding of Manwe and Eru Himself to the Oath in its later versions were "editorial embellishments" by Tolkien, to enhance the blasphemous nature of the Oath (as he called it in the Waldmann letter nowizardme cited in the OP), and to explain how Maedhros and Maglor felt beholden to it even after the War of Wrath. As originally written, the Oath itself was not quite blasphemous - its execution was.


sador
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Apr 24 2013, 8:00am

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Does anyone have an argument to support Feanor about this, or is this simply inexcusable?
None really; not unless you want to indulge in conspiracy theories, suggesting that the story was really quite different. But there is no basis for it, and Feanor's mood might easily lead him to think that the Teleri are actively hindering him from fulfilling his oath, which would justify (in his eyes) siezing the ships by force.
The one thing that might be said is that he might not have really wanted it to escalate into bloodshed. His mind was clouded enough to assume the Teleri would back down, as the didn't really stand any chance; and from the text, it is not clear who it was who actually began the violence.

Do we have any more sympathy for the late-commers misunderstanding the situation and joining the battle, perhaps later realising that that was wrong?
Well, that's more simple; if you find your own people involved in a bitter fight, it is natural to join the affray and help them rather than asking who is in the right of the quarrel. Had it been corrupted Avari (aka orcs) there would be no question at all. While Fingon and his followers are stained, they could not hold allof from the fight unless they trusted Olwe better than Feanor. Which we might expect them to, but we know a very limited part of the picture.

my dictionary has "prophesy" as meaning either "prediction" (like Fredegar Bolger's doctor telling him what's likely to happen if he won't cut down on the pies)

He won't be able to run away from Black Riders? He actually did pretty well on that one.

Or should a philosophical cam be filled with philosophers, rather than worms?
I don't know; but at least one eminent physicist had a cat in his...

A curse, though is "a solemn utterance intended to invoke a supernatural power to inflict harm or punishment"

Just like Feanor did! From this point, it's damned if you do and damned if you don't.

The Valar are warning the Noldor of what will happen? Or that the Valar are giving out punishment (or both?)
The oblique ambiguity of it really suggests that its Mandos himself, doesn't it?

Prediction? Prophecy? Curse? All of those? Are the Valar trying to help here, or to punish? Or both?

This might be the Valar's idea of help...
But seriously, it could be an attempt to help (by dissuasion) those following Feanor. They have wased their hands of that family.

I do have one final question, however - why is it "On The Flight of the Noldor"? I'm supposing "flight "comes from "feeing" - but what are they fleeing?
It indicates that they finally feel free; after being held captive, the can finally return home, as indicated also by the name of chapter 13.
Captivity does not mean that they were forcibly brought to Valinor or held there; compare to the Babylonian_Captivity of the Church in the 14th century.


Thank you for this discussion!

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