** The Coming of Men into the West ** 1 - Introduction

Elizabeth

Half-elven
Welcome to Chapter 17! I have been wrestling with computer issues the last couple of weeks, and am not as organized as I would have liked, so I can't tell you how many posts I'll have, but I hope we can still have a good discussion. Please note that I live in the Far, Far West, only one time zone East of the International Date Line. Perhaps as close as I can come to Tol Eressea! So it's late Sunday night here.

I assume the overall organization of the Sil was determined by Christopher T. and his collaborator Guy Kay. They have developed a strategic interweaving of chapters featuring absorbing or even thrilling narratives, such as the episodes involving Fëonor, the Rebellion of the Noldor, and last week's adventures of Aredhel, Eöl, and Maeglin, with background essays on the history, culture, and geography of Middle Earth. This is one of the historical treatises.

The first time or two I read the Sil, I found the background chapters tedious, and tended to skip or skim them, as I suspect many readers do. But, as glorious as the action narratives can be, I became fascinated with the world of Middle Earth itself, and found that the background chapters helped satisfy my thirst for knowing more about this world and how it operated. I hope some of you share that fascination and will not just hide under your desks or in the Hobbit forum until the action resumes next week!

1. How do you feel about the mix of narrative and background in the book so far? A good balance? Too much of either?

Most of the material in this chapter was written quite late, in 1958. Christopher writes of this chapter:

It emerges in a typescript (with carbon copy) made by my father: of antecedent draft material there is not no trace, but it seems to me very improbably that the text reached this form ab initio.
Arda Reconstructed describes it as a "major expansion of the 'Edain' portion of what had been called 'Of the Naugrim and the Edain' (and before that, 'Of Men and Dwarfs'), which had been … in the earlier Quenta." The complete text can be found in "The Later Quenta Silmarillion" section of The War of the Jewels (HoME XI), even though most of that text is included in our published chapter. I will point out the few interesting or significant changes and omissions when we come to them, and am grateful to Veronwë_the_Faithful for his commentary in Arda Reconstructed.

As we learned a few weeks ago, Men first awoke in the land of Hildórein in eastern Middle Earth "At the first rising of the Sun." About 300 years have passed (some ME chronologies assert 320 years) since then.

To the extent that Tolkien attempted to avoid direct conflict with Biblical accounts, we could easily imagine that the groups of Men that we see in this chapter split off from the ones that the Genesis story followed at some point to seek a different destiny.

2. What do you think Men have been been doing for 300+ years? Wandering about cluelessly like the Elves at Cuviénen? Following the Biblical narrative off-stage? If you wish, speculate on how much of the Genesis history elapsed before this group split off and headed West.

Next: Finrod Felagund goes hunting, and finds something he didn't expect.
 
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To begin with, it's great to see you back in the leader's seat! I hope the computer problems are over. [blush]

1. How do you feel about the mix of narrative and background in the book so far? A good balance? Too much of either?
Now I like it. But like you, on my first readings I felt really frustrated - whenever I felt I was beginning to get the hang of stuff, a new truckload came! [crazy]

2. What do you think Men have been been doing for 300+ years? Wandering about cluelessly like the Elves at Cuviénen? Following the Biblical narrative off-stage? If you wish, speculate on how much of the Genesis history elapsed before this group split off and headed West.
No, I do not think this history corresponded to the Biblical history (although given enough time, Tolkien might have attempted to bring in nearer). To begin with, the first generations have a normal lifespan.
The Athrabeth should be mentioned, here, and more specifically the Tale of Adanel. We discussed it four months ago, led by Voronve. link.
 
content in the knowledge that my views about this chapter will be accurately reported. [:)]

Arda Reconstructed describes it as a "major expansion of the 'Edain' portion of what had been called 'Of the Naugrim and the Edain' (and before that, 'Of Men and Dwarfs'), which had been … in the earlier Quenta." The complete text can be found in "The Later Quenta Silmarillion" section of The War of the Jewels (HoME XI), even though most of that text is included in our published chapter. I will point out the few interesting or significant changes and omissions when we come to them, and am grateful to Voronwë_the_Faithful for his commentary in Arda Reconstructed.
 
You say that the footnote concerning Bëor's name meaning Vassal was omitted; in fact, it was incorporated in the text at the end of paragraph 12 (the WotJ version says the name signifies "Servant".)

But, I find your work quite fascinating on the whole. Thank you!
 
What I meant was that the full footnote in which it is stated that Beor's name signified vassal, which states " Thus Beor got his name; for it signified Vassal in their tongue, and each of their chieftains after him bore this name as a title until the time of Bregolas and Barahir" was omitted, even though the third footnote was fully inserted into the text. It is true that later in the text, the word "vassal" is substituted for "servant". While technically my statement that the footnote was omitted was true, I should have been clearer on this point.

I'm glad that you have enjoyed the work, overall. [:)]
 
I will second what sador said about thinking you know what's going on then getting a whole new truckload of stuff! This is my 2nd read through and at this point the *drama* is more interesting (ok, easier) than...all that other stuff! [tongue] I do like the essay-like material, it's just all the darn names!!!!!!!!!!!
I did find it helpful to expand the family trees of the Elves, writing in additional info next to most characters' names so that I am not constantly flipping around within the book (most distracting!). I anticipate doing that again sometime this week.
 
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