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Chen G.
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Apr 19 2020, 2:34pm
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The subjects on the itinerary of the council seem pertinent to the books, too: they're mostly talking about Thrain, Smaug, Angmar and the Necromancer. Angmar? Angmar??? Why in the world would the Council have been discussing a depopulated region whose existence as an evil kingdom was over a thousand years in the past? I mean in the sense that Gandalf figured that Sauron would have reclaimed Angmar to launch an attack on Rivendell and Lorien, which is quite explicit in both The Quest of Erebor and Durin's Folk.
The bit about "darker minds will turn towards Erebor" can be traced to Gandalf's fears as voiced in "The Quest of Erebor". Yep. The idea of tying the Trolls, Orcs (here in lieu of the Goblins) and Spiders back to Dol Guldur was an original invention, by comparison, but one which succesful at tying those otherwise disparate, episodic adventures back into the main story, which is important for a movie. Its a device Jackson imployed with Caradhras, where he has the storm be the result of Saruman's doing. Granted, its a device Tolkien once riled against (when a radio adaptation made Old-Man Willow out to be allied with Mordor) but also one he imployed himself, with the likes of The Watcher in the Water (pointing that he went for Frodo), with the Easterlings of the early third age (saying that servants of Sauron turned them against Gondor), etcetra...
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Solicitr
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Apr 19 2020, 2:54pm
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The idea of tying the Trolls, Orcs (here in lieu of the Goblins) and Spiders back to Dol Guldur was an original invention, by comparison, but one which succesful at tying those otherwise disparate, episodic adventures back into the main story, which is important for a movie. Its a device Jackson imployed with Caradhras, where he has the storm be the result of Saruman's doing. Which was also a bad idea (and contradicted the source) I would also point out that the Watcher singling out Frodo does not imply that it was "working for Sauron," simply that the Ring tended to attract evil creatures.
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Chen G.
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Apr 19 2020, 3:10pm
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If you look at it without bias, it does work. All the obstacles encountered by the company (with the possible exception of the Goblins) tie back to the "big bad", and NOT in a way that comes off as a last-minute retcon (The Rise of Skywalker and Spectre come to mind). The Spiders are introduced in association with Dol Guldur from the start, and Gandalf almost immediately associates the Trolls with "a darker power." Curiously, Azog is only revealed as allegiant to Sauron quite late in the game, but since Gandalf already cites the Orc attack as a sign of some kind of rising evil, the set-up is clearly there, and Howard Shore comes in and smears that hint a mile wide all over Azog.
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Otaku-sempai
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Apr 20 2020, 2:56am
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I mean in the sense that Gandalf figured that Sauron would have reclaimed Angmar to launch an attack on Rivendell and Lorien, which is quite explicit in both The Quest of Erebor and Durin's Folk. You're right; it's right there in LotR, Appendix A.III. "Durin's Folk" (bolded for emphasis):
Among many cares [Gandalf] was troubled by in mind by the perilous state of the North; because he knew then already that Sauron was plotting war, and intended, as soon as he felt strong enough, to attack Rivendell. But to resist any attempt from the East to regain the lands of Angmar and the northern passes in the mountains there were now only the Dwarves of the Iron Hills. And beyond them lay the desolation of the Dragon. The Dragon Sauron might use with terrible effect. How then could the end of Smaug be achieved? We don't even need to check with "The Quest of Erebor" (of which there is several versions). It is reasonable to conclude that Gandalf would bring up such concerns in Council.
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lurtz2010
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Apr 20 2020, 5:39am
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An early script for the Rankin/Bass TV special did include everything, but it was deemed too much. Rankin wanted to cut out the spiders, but was convinced to excise Beorn instead. I think its wrong to compare the way an animated TV special is paced with the way a live-action movie is or should. The way the Rankin/Bass TV special (which, I must say, upon rewatch is insufferably twee) is structured would have felt very rushed in live-action, and I'm not even fond of it within the context of the special. In general, I don't think every story should be the shortest version of itself that's humany possible. That's a very reductive approach to narrative. By that approach, Lawrence of Arabia should have been around two-and-a-half hours, which is to say nothing of Titanic. You're right, a live-action film--even one deliberately setting out to be child-friendly--is a very different beast than an animated adaptation. Though, if the Rankin/Bass Hobbit is insufferably twee, it gets some of that from the original book. Generally, I don't think that such an adaptation should be "the shortest version of itself that's [humanly] possible" unless that serves the story as the filmmaker wants to tell it. Even so, we can see how poorly that worked with the 1966 animated short version of The Hobbit (granted, that was actually meant to be proof-of-concept for an animated feature-length film that was never made). Personally, I think that a 2-film adaptation without much of the extra stuff that Peter Jackson added (though I would still have borrowed from the LotR appendices) would have been ideal. Getting back to the book itself, the middle of the narrative comes in with either the rescue of the company by the Eagles or with their arrival at Beorn's house. Structurally, it would probably be better to end the first of two films with the rescue, and begin the second part with the introduction of Beorn. If you were to end part 1 of 2 as early as the eagle rescue just like AUJ did then that leaves only a small part of the story to fill up that first film. How would that film work without the Azog subplot? To me AUJ only worked as a film in itself because they added in that extra (made up) subplot. What would be the over arching story for that first film without any major additions that weren’t in the book? Then part 2 would have to deal with a whole lot more. Start with Beorn then everything up to going back to Bag End, that’s a lot to cover. How would that work? I think the barrel escape is the best ending for a film 1 of 2 but even then for obvious “movie” reasons it would have to be an action scene.
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lurtz2010
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Apr 20 2020, 6:41am
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IMO the White Council subplot, with at least the most important members Elrond, Galadriel and Saruman, should be included And there I disagree, because any such attempt would have to be invented from whole cloth: in other words, just fan-fic. Even if not as horribly bad as what we got (Nazgul tombs, anyone? Gandalf and Galadriel acting like schoolchildren passing notes in class?), it would still be spurious invention, not Tolkien. --------------------------------- The Quest of Erebor, in all its versions, never provides Sauron with a motivation, aside from Gandalf's speculation that he could have found a use for Smaug when the war came... and the threat was to Rivendell, not the Iron Hills. We do learn that Sauron sent out his minions to hunt Thrain, for the sake of his Ring. But that was well after Erebor had fallen, of course. To my mind, the only real place that QoE material would be useful in a Hobbit adaptation is the matter of Gandalf having to persuade (strongarm) Thorin into taking that ridiculous Halfling along. so would your ideal Hobbit film/s not include the white council or dol guldur subplot at all? Just have Gandalf disappear for a large chunk of the story with only a couple of lines of dialogue explaining where he’s been? I don’t know how well that would work for most audiences. Personally I liked the way they did it in the films with the Nazgul and the High Fells even if it does kind of contradict what Aragorn says about them in FOTR. I especially liked how they introduced the subplot with Radagast and the Greenwood becoming infected. I really wish they had included Gandalf’s vision of Smaug in the palantir at Dol Guldur.
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Chen G.
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Apr 20 2020, 9:23am
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Personally I liked the way they did it in the films with the Nazgul and the High Fells. The High Fells bit clearly has to do with the fact that they play out Dol Guldur subplot as a mystery/detective story. In a mystery story, you can't have the detective's first stop be his only one: he needs to piece together some clues and pass through a least one more place on the way.
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lurtz2010
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Apr 20 2020, 10:27am
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And I agree it makes for a good mystery/detective story. Plus the Nazgul being raised from the dead also gives reason for Sauron to be called the Necromancer at this point. As I said though, there is the fact that Aragorn says they were once men who fell into darkness from the power of their rings and became the wraiths. That makes it sound like they never actually died but that doesn’t matter to me too much.
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Chen G.
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Apr 20 2020, 12:13pm
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isn't that they died, but that they were entombed in the High Fells. At no point do the members of the White Council express any astonishment that the Nine may be back: they express astonishment over the idea that the tombs were breached: "a powerful spell lies on those tombs." That such spells were needed, not to mention that its described as "a tomb so dark, it'll never come to light", implies that the Nazgul weren't really dead.
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Solicitr
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Apr 20 2020, 1:40pm
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IMO the White Council subplot, with at least the most important members Elrond, Galadriel and Saruman, should be included And there I disagree, because any such attempt would have to be invented from whole cloth: in other words, just fan-fic. Even if not as horribly bad as what we got (Nazgul tombs, anyone? Gandalf and Galadriel acting like schoolchildren passing notes in class?), it would still be spurious invention, not Tolkien. --------------------------------- The Quest of Erebor, in all its versions, never provides Sauron with a motivation, aside from Gandalf's speculation that he could have found a use for Smaug when the war came... and the threat was to Rivendell, not the Iron Hills. We do learn that Sauron sent out his minions to hunt Thrain, for the sake of his Ring. But that was well after Erebor had fallen, of course. To my mind, the only real place that QoE material would be useful in a Hobbit adaptation is the matter of Gandalf having to persuade (strongarm) Thorin into taking that ridiculous Halfling along. so would your ideal Hobbit film/s not include the white council or dol guldur subplot at all? Precisely. Film the book Tolkien wrote, not the one he didn't write.
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Solicitr
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Apr 20 2020, 1:44pm
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If you were to end part 1 of 2 as early as the eagle rescue just like AUJ did then that leaves only a small part of the story to fill up that first film. How would that film work without the Azog subplot? To me AUJ only worked as a film in itself because they added in that extra (made up) subplot. What would be the over arching story for that first film without any major additions that weren’t in the book? Um, Thorin & Co's journey eastward to Erebor? That's plenty. Not all movies have to have a "villain" to drive the action. Just to name a couple of reasonably recent "road movies," consider Rain Man, or Thelma and Louise: no pursuing baddie in sight. Simply laying out a journey with a goal is enough, overcoming obstacles along the way. A slightly different example: Shackleton.
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Otaku-sempai
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Apr 20 2020, 2:02pm
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If you were to end part 1 of 2 as early as the eagle rescue just like AUJ did then that leaves only a small part of the story to fill up that first film. How would that film work without the Azog subplot? To me AUJ only worked as a film in itself because they added in that extra (made up) subplot. What would be the over arching story for that first film without any major additions that weren’t in the book? Then part 2 would have to deal with a whole lot more. Start with Beorn then everything up to going back to Bag End, that’s a lot to cover. How would that work? I think the barrel escape is the best ending for a film 1 of 2 but even then for obvious “movie” reasons it would have to be an action scene. I think there are enough plot developments in the first half of the book to end at the rescue by the Eagles, though I can understand why there might be doubts. Quite a bit actually does happen: - An Unexpected Party - The Trolls - Rivendell - The Giants in the High Pass - Capture by the Goblins - Escape - Riddles in the Dark - Pursuit - Fifteen birds rescued by Eagles Don't forget that we could fill the film out with elements taken from the appendices. - A prologue with Gandalf and Thorin in Bree (perhaps continued at the Halls of Thorin). - Perhaps a sequence in Bree. - White Council business between Gandalf and Elrond in Rivendell (the full White Council meeting and debate would be in Part 2). For Part 2, we don't have to spend a lot of screen time in Mirkwood or with the Wood-elves, we just need to establish that a significant amount of time passes in those locations. Lake-town is a relatively brief stopover, the movie could take a moment to give Bard a proper introduction. There is a bit of a passage of time searching for the Secret Door and waiting for Durin's Day, but much of that could be glossed over--though maybe not as severely as was done in Peter Jackson's adaptation. Much the same for the period between Smaug's attack on Lake-town and the besieging of the Lonely Mountain. We certainly don't need to see every detail of the return journey.
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Noria
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Apr 20 2020, 2:08pm
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Its also been quite effectivelly well knit into the story of the quest itself. The very impetus of the quest is Gandalf intercepting a message to assasinate Thorin and fearing that "darker minds will turn towards Erebor." Then, he ties the Trolls coming down from the Ettenmoors to a rising evil. Azog and his Orc Riders are soon thereafter shown to be working for Sauron, and we later learn that besides Azog's thirst for revenge, Sauron had sent them to hunt the company down. And you can't recognize all of that as spurious fan-fic? I don’t regard the choices that Walsh, Boyens and Jackson made in writing their adaptation as either spurious or as fan-fic. I do regard the term fan-fic as nothing more than a cheap and facile personal insult against the film makers. In the case of TH, I see the added material as embellishments to the basic story made in order to expand upon and explore the story and themes of the novel and movies. As holders (through WB) of the right and obligation to adapt the novel, the film makers made decisions that they thought would make better movies. Nobody has to agree with them. Can you not see that other people see TH movies differently than you do and have their reasons for doing so just as you do for your opinion?
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Solicitr
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Apr 20 2020, 2:14pm
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I do regard the term fan-fic as nothing more than a cheap and facile personal insult against the film makers. As was its intent.
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lurtz2010
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Apr 21 2020, 2:02am
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Part 1 would still need to stand on its own though
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If you were to end part 1 of 2 as early as the eagle rescue just like AUJ did then that leaves only a small part of the story to fill up that first film. How would that film work without the Azog subplot? To me AUJ only worked as a film in itself because they added in that extra (made up) subplot. What would be the over arching story for that first film without any major additions that weren’t in the book? Then part 2 would have to deal with a whole lot more. Start with Beorn then everything up to going back to Bag End, that’s a lot to cover. How would that work? I think the barrel escape is the best ending for a film 1 of 2 but even then for obvious “movie” reasons it would have to be an action scene. I think there are enough plot developments in the first half of the book to end at the rescue by the Eagles, though I can understand why there might be doubts. Quite a bit actually does happen: - An Unexpected Party - The Trolls - Rivendell - The Giants in the High Pass - Capture by the Goblins - Escape - Riddles in the Dark - Pursuit - Fifteen birds rescued by Eagles Don't forget that we could fill the film out with elements taken from the appendices. - A prologue with Gandalf and Thorin in Bree (perhaps continued at the Halls of Thorin). - Perhaps a sequence in Bree. - White Council business between Gandalf and Elrond in Rivendell (the full White Council meeting and debate would be in Part 2). For Part 2, we don't have to spend a lot of screen time in Mirkwood or with the Wood-elves, we just need to establish that a significant amount of time passes in those locations. Lake-town is a relatively brief stopover, the movie could take a moment to give Bard a proper introduction. There is a bit of a passage of time searching for the Secret Door and waiting for Durin's Day, but much of that could be glossed over--though maybe not as severely as was done in Peter Jackson's adaptation. Much the same for the period between Smaug's attack on Lake-town and the besieging of the Lonely Mountain. We certainly don't need to see every detail of the return journey. Following just the book with added white council stuff would still make it feel like Act1 and I bet general audiences wouldn’t accept it very well. There wouldn’t be anything in the film that comes full circle or any kind of proper resolution. Thorin’s showdown with Azog and Bilbo saving his life were invented material but it worked to give the film some kind of arc. I don’t think Bilbo just finding the ring then giving a nice speech to the company about being willing to help the dwarves reclaim their homeland would be enough to end part 1 satisfactorily. The whole film would just be a series of adventures with a sudden “to be continued” type ending with no arc whatsoever to make the film stand on its own.
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skyofcoffeebeans
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Apr 21 2020, 2:45am
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The White Council subplot got an extreme payoff in the form of Sauron’s appearance in Jackson’s two-film treatment. What bothers me more is that I suspect a second film starting with Beorn would involve over an hour and a half of repetitive character introductions followed by swift dismissals. Furthermore, how does that divide contribute to the telling of Bilbo’s story? He doesn’t fully gain the confidence of the company until the spiders and barrels. You’ve also got a pretty simple set up and payoff with Sting.
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Chen G.
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Apr 21 2020, 9:17am
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Lake-town is a relatively brief stopover, the movie could take a moment to give Bard a proper introduction. But, its essential that the storytelling slows down with the introduction of Laketown, both in the sense of the deep breath before the plunge, as well as in the sense that we the audience need to become invested in Laketown so that a) its conflageration means something to us and b) so that, in the later parts of the story, we sympathize with the People of Laketown more than with the Dwarves, which adds a complexity to the story.
I don’t think Bilbo just finding the ring then giving a nice speech to the company about being willing to help the dwarves reclaim their homeland would be enough to end part 1 satisfactorily. The whole film would just be a series of adventures with a sudden “to be continued” type ending with no arc whatsoever to make the film stand on its own. The idea in the two-film cut was that Bilbo's ingenuity to get the Dwarves to the barrels was what earned Thorin's appreciation. You can still catch the buildup to the climax that never was in how Thorin comes to trust Bilbo when he tells the others to "do what he says." So there is some payoff there.
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lurtz2010
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Apr 21 2020, 9:54am
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You’re right but I was referring to an eagles rescue ending
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I don’t think Bilbo just finding the ring then giving a nice speech to the company about being willing to help the dwarves reclaim their homeland would be enough to end part 1 satisfactorily. The whole film would just be a series of adventures with a sudden “to be continued” type ending with no arc whatsoever to make the film stand on its own. The idea in the two-film cut was that Bilbo's ingenuity to get the Dwarves to the barrels was what earned Thorin's appreciation. You can still catch the buildup to the climax that never was in how Thorin comes to trust Bilbo when he tells the others to "do what he says." So there is some payoff there. Otaku was suggesting part 1 end with Out of the Frying Pan and I was saying there might not be enough payoff there without any made up additions. As I’ve said I think the barrel escape would be the best ending and a would make for a better point for Thorin to appreciate Bilbo. Perhaps there was a scene on the river side similar to the Carrock scene in AUJ where Thorin admits to Bilbo that he shouldn’t have doubted him? I also think barrels is the best breaking point because of the differences in the environments before and after this section that would make the two films distinct from each other. Film 1 would be all green and lush then film 2 will be grey and desolate.
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Chen G.
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Apr 21 2020, 10:37am
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We have a very dramatic change between An Unexpected Journey and The Desolation of Smaug as it is. An Unexpected Journey takes place in Eriador, and its not only generally lush and vibrant (as well as comical in tone) but also very nostalgic in terms of locations revisited from The Lord of the Rings. In The Desolation of Smaug, while the design aesthetic is still recognisably Middle Earth, everything is new. There's nothing in The Lord of the Rings quite like Beorn and even his house - this outsized, story-book-type thatched lodging in the middle of the wilderness - is a very new visual for this series. Mirkwood is also very, very unique, as is the Dickensian Laketown.
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Otaku-sempai
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Apr 21 2020, 12:12pm
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Following just the book with added white council stuff would still make it feel like Act1 and I bet general audiences wouldn’t accept it very well. There wouldn’t be anything in the film that comes full circle or any kind of proper resolution. Thorin’s showdown with Azog and Bilbo saving his life were invented material but it worked to give the film some kind of arc. I don’t think Bilbo just finding the ring then giving a nice speech to the company about being willing to help the dwarves reclaim their homeland would be enough to end part 1 satisfactorily. The whole film would just be a series of adventures with a sudden “to be continued” type ending with no arc whatsoever to make the film stand on its own. Given that we are discussing a 2-part adaptation that is more faithful to Tolkien, I have concerns with taking Part 1 all the way to the Woodland Realm and the barrel escape. I'm not sure that leaves enough story for Part 2 without feeling like we have to add padding. A compromise might be to take Part 1 into Mirkwood and end with the fight with the spiders. This does let Bilbo reach one of his personal milestones. We might end with the cliffhanger of "Where's Thorin?"
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lurtz2010
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Apr 21 2020, 12:44pm
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No way does it not leave much for film 2
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Establish the world of men at lake town and the characters of bard and the master. Journey through Dale and to the mountain Bilbo and Smaug Attack on Laketown Aftermath and politics etc Dol guldur scenes The battle It’s basically the second half of DOS and all of BOFA but without the unnecessary additions, there is a lot there. Ending part1 after the spider battle could work but imo it would be abit of a dull cliffhanger compared to the company actually escaping prison with their destination in sight.
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Otaku-sempai
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Apr 21 2020, 1:02pm
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...some of that should not take up much screen time. Other elements could stand to be expanded upon (introducing Bard while the company is still in Esgaroth comes to mind). It's probably debatable whether the White Council acted against Dol Guldur before or after the company arrived at Lake-town, but it was right around that time and the movie could play with that a bit. In either case, Gandalf might not have departed for Erebor for a few days yet. If we start Part 2 at Lake-town, do we have Sauron (as the Necromancer) withdraw from Dol Guldur at about the same time the company is escaping from the Wood-elves? That seems to be just about when Gandalf and his council of wizards (actually the White Council, naturally) take action in the book (and another reason why your version of Part 1 might feel a bit crowded--unless you propose not including the White Council subplot).
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lurtz2010
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Apr 21 2020, 1:28pm
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I would set up the White Council in film 1
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But not have the attack on Dol Guldur until 2. I wouldn’t be too fussed the timeline of those events, I’m even fine with showing the Greenwood becoming Mirkwood even though that happened many years before in the book and I think Gandalf finding Thrain in Dol Guldur during this story works well instead of before the quest like in the book.
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Solicitr
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Apr 21 2020, 1:50pm
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One could just leave out the White Council and attack on Dol Guldur entirely. Along with Azog.
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Otaku-sempai
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Apr 21 2020, 2:03pm
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I don't think it works on film to just have Gandalf drop out of the picture for an extended period of time with no explanation (except at the very end). I have no objection to including the White Council, though I don't think I would have structured it as Peter Jackson did. I also would have kept the corruption of the Greenwood and Gandalf's discovery of Thrain in the past. If everyone was so certain that Sauron wouldn't return, why send the Istari to Middle-earth at all? That's a major plot hole in Jackson's Hobbit.
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