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PrincessWhat
Nevrast

Oct 31 2008, 7:05am
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Footsteps & Memories (poetry)
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Two different treatments of a theme for your Halloween reading enjoyment (I hope!): H aunted by footsteps and memories A nother cold Rohan autumn night L onely under the pale harvest moon L ooking at the wreckage of my life O nly the undead for my company W e wander the corridors of Edoras E very memory refuses to leave E maciated wraiths that won't die N eeding my lifeblood for their fell feast. Haunted by footsteps and memories I wander the corridors of Edoras My substance no more than the withered leaves Longing for death's hand to fall at last. My loved ones are gone or at death's dark door, My brother exiled and my king's mind dull. Forgotten, the joys that I knew before, In days beyond memory, I can't recall. A ghost I've become, a mere wraith, a shade, Wandering the corridors of Edoras Seeking a refuge, seeking escape, From this grim existence that will not pass. With only the dead for my company Whose faces now haunt me - I am undone. Tormented and trapped by my memories And the footsteps of Grima Wormtongue.
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SirDennisC
Gondolin

Nov 2 2008, 5:57pm
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You've captured Eowyn's mood here. My bottom lip quivers for her.
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PrincessWhat
Nevrast

Nov 3 2008, 1:26am
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I appreciate the kind words very much!
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