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dernwyn
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Oct 17 2012, 2:11am
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What do you think of this rather sudden emergence of a hero in this chapter?
Too sudden. I would have liked a bit of introduction to a "grim" character back when the dwarves and Bilbo were being hosted by the townspeople. Even just a line or two, mentioning a character who has the feeling that no good will come of this. Then when he appears in this chapter, we can be thinking "Him again - now what's he got to do with all this?".
But the way he appears here, it feels too close to being a deus ex machina.
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"I desired dragons with a profound desire"
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