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A Haiku Challenge!

grammaboodawg
Immortal


Jun 23 2015, 9:51am

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It's time to use those incredible brain-cells and shake out a Haiku (or two) to celebrate Bilbo's return home only to find an auction going on!



A haiku is a very simple form of poetic expression: 3 lines per poem, with line one having 5 syllables, line two having 7 syllables, and line three having 5 syllables. They do not have to rhyme. The haiku is meant to force the writer to use a minimum of words and phrasing, yet create a vivid image in the readers’ minds.

Here's an example:

Bilbo arrives home
only to find it trampled
and strip't at auction


Easy Peasy! You're Turn! :D





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We have been there and back again.



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NottaSackville
Valinor

Jun 23 2015, 12:38pm

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Haichoo! Ga'bless you! [In reply to] Can't Post

Casks filled with gold coins
Could not soften the sadness
House bereft of home

Happiness: money matters, but less than we think and not in the way that we think. Family is important and so are friends, while envy is toxic -- and so is excessive thinking. Beaches are optional. Trust is not. Neither is gratitude. - The Geography of Bliss by Eric Weiner as summarized by Lily Fairbairn. And a bit of the Hobbit reading thrown in never hurts. - NottaSackville


grammaboodawg
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Jun 23 2015, 1:21pm

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Thag you very buch ;) // [In reply to] Can't Post

 



Hobbit: BotFA Geeky Observation List draft #5 1/30/15


6th draft of TH:AUJ Geeky Observations List - November 28, 2013
4th draft of TH:DOS Geeky Observations List - May 15, 2014



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We have been there and back again.



TIME Google Calendar
TORn's Geeky Observations Lists for LotR and The Hobbit


grammaboodawg
Immortal


Jun 23 2015, 1:28pm

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another... [In reply to] Can't Post

Sackville-Bagginses
snobbish silver spoon spoilers
never said t'was him



Hobbit: BotFA Geeky Observation List draft #5 1/30/15


6th draft of TH:AUJ Geeky Observations List - November 28, 2013
4th draft of TH:DOS Geeky Observations List - May 15, 2014



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We have been there and back again.



TIME Google Calendar
TORn's Geeky Observations Lists for LotR and The Hobbit


Brethil
Half-elven


Jun 23 2015, 3:29pm

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Fun Gramma! [In reply to] Can't Post

Hidden silver spoons... ting
Bilbo's hands steal back his own
Quest lesson well learned.









Bracegirdle
Valinor


Jun 23 2015, 9:31pm

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Haiku - Choo-choo * Fun Gramma [In reply to] Can't Post

Bilbo Baggin’s dead?
“Hello, I’m not yet dead!” he said.
“Stop this sale!”, he pled.

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Boromir looked in surprise at Bilbo, but the laughter died on his lips when he saw that all the others regarded the old hobbit with grave respect. Only Glóin smiled, but his smile came from old memories.
-JRR Tolkien


Ilmatar
Rohan


Jun 23 2015, 10:13pm

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There's always the first time... :-o [In reply to] Can't Post

Journey at its end
Hopes of peace and coziness
Sadly were not met


I take it that the pronunciation is what counts, with the syllables? For example, the word "so-me-thing" has three syllables but sounds like two, while "ho-pe" has two but sounds like one...? (The middle row has nine syllables but sounds like seven, I think...)


(This post was edited by Ilmatar on Jun 23 2015, 10:17pm)


Bracegirdle
Valinor


Jun 23 2015, 10:43pm

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I think you're on the money Ilmatar [In reply to] Can't Post

But I think I'm off with "hello" (2 sounds/syllables?) Crazy

Boromir looked in surprise at Bilbo, but the laughter died on his lips when he saw that all the others regarded the old hobbit with grave respect. Only Glóin smiled, but his smile came from old memories.
-JRR Tolkien


grammaboodawg
Immortal


Jun 24 2015, 9:48am

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That's how I do it :D [In reply to] Can't Post

Well Done!

That's why I kind of cheat by making a word into a slang to get rid of an extra syllable. It's just fun to see what we can come up with. ;)



Hobbit: BotFA Geeky Observation List draft #5 1/30/15


6th draft of TH:AUJ Geeky Observations List - November 28, 2013
4th draft of TH:DOS Geeky Observations List - May 15, 2014



sample

We have been there and back again.



TIME Google Calendar
TORn's Geeky Observations Lists for LotR and The Hobbit


dormouse
Half-elven


Jun 24 2015, 7:09pm

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Hmm.... [In reply to] Can't Post

He travelled so far
Saw friends die and dreams broken
Found home broken too

Returning he knew
His own place in the wide world
The meaning of home


Compa_Mighty
Tol Eressea


Jun 24 2015, 9:53pm

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It's all in the source [In reply to] Can't Post

Home is behind you
Roads go ever ever on
There and Back Again

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(This post was edited by Compa_Mighty on Jun 24 2015, 9:54pm)


Compa_Mighty
Tol Eressea


Jun 24 2015, 9:57pm

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Mordorian Haiku (Off-Topic a bit :p) [In reply to] Can't Post

One Ring to Rule Them
In Darkness, where shadows lie
Find, bring and bind them

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(This post was edited by Compa_Mighty on Jun 24 2015, 9:58pm)


Bracegirdle
Valinor


Jun 25 2015, 1:07am

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Ooo, a double Haiku - Fun in the teapot [In reply to] Can't Post

By foal, foot and boat
A hero, leader, and bold
For a fourteenth share.

Home to further grief
Set to rights soon thereafter
Blesséd happiness.
Angelic

Boromir looked in surprise at Bilbo, but the laughter died on his lips when he saw that all the others regarded the old hobbit with grave respect. Only Glóin smiled, but his smile came from old memories.
-JRR Tolkien


grammaboodawg
Immortal


Jun 25 2015, 5:04pm

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Here's another one [In reply to] Can't Post

 
An auction... but why?
"I'm not dead! I can prove it!
Careful with my things!"


"Oh, don't blunt the knives,
Chip the glasses, crack the plates
and don't bend the forks!"


Bilbo hates the mud
on his Mother's Glory Box!
"Careful with those plates!"



Hobbit: BotFA Geeky Observation List draft #5 1/30/15


6th draft of TH:AUJ Geeky Observations List - November 28, 2013
4th draft of TH:DOS Geeky Observations List - May 15, 2014



sample

We have been there and back again.



TIME Google Calendar
TORn's Geeky Observations Lists for LotR and The Hobbit


Ethel Duath
Half-elven


Jun 26 2015, 2:54am

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Ah! I really [In reply to] Can't Post

like this!

Nice to see you around, Compa!Smile (Or maybe I've just missed some posts, being in and out of here myself lately.BlushEvil)



Compa_Mighty
Tol Eressea


Jun 26 2015, 2:34pm

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Hello, Ethel! [In reply to] Can't Post

Yes, I've been mostly away for the past 2 years or so, I very rarely browse, and my posting is now more of an anomaly... blame real life. Tongue It's always nice to drop by and say hello to all the wonderful people here at TORn!

Hope everyone is well. Smile

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Ethel Duath
Half-elven


Jun 26 2015, 5:32pm

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We'll have to do more haiku challenges then [In reply to] Can't Post

to give you an excuse to come back!SmileSmile


 
 

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