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If you want advice

Mr. Arkenstone (isaac)
Gondor


May 7 2013, 9:16pm


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If you want advice [In reply to] Can't Post

I have been reading the prologue, and it starts with so many data, names of plasces mainly, so many

If you allow me, I would start with a shocking phrase, one that hooks the audience and then I would start with some character (not necesarry the main) but people usually dont feel conection with a mountain, (not in the first paragraph at least, well I odnt know, hehe)

And then imagine the wildest situation (or ridiculous one) that comes to your mind, dont judge it, just start building from that, you will be surprised how the story leads you to unknown places

Oh and try something new, Tolkien had his time, you will probably have your own shining far away of good“s professor“s shadow

Well sorry for the spelling I“m spanish and it is not my tongue, I hope this will help you because once it helped me

Thanks good Otaku for reading your stuff

IMO

best luck

The flagon with the dragon has the brew that is true!

Subject User Time
A LotR inspired book I'm writing FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin Apr 30 2013, 1:31am
    Also... FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin Apr 30 2013, 11:59pm
        Wow... FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin May 1 2013, 2:25am
    Nothing personal... Otaku-sempai Send a private message to Otaku-sempai May 1 2013, 6:04am
        . FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin May 1 2013, 1:05pm
            You were complaining that you were not getting any resoponses Otaku-sempai Send a private message to Otaku-sempai May 1 2013, 2:54pm
    And nothing personal, but... DwellerInDale Send a private message to DwellerInDale May 1 2013, 1:04pm
        I'm sure they won't. FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin May 1 2013, 1:20pm
            Spelling matters (sorry, too late to edit my last post) Otaku-sempai Send a private message to Otaku-sempai May 1 2013, 3:33pm
                Thanks for reading FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin May 1 2013, 4:54pm
                    Yes, I meant your mixture of italics and bold lettering... Otaku-sempai Send a private message to Otaku-sempai May 1 2013, 5:15pm
                        Wow, I stink... FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin May 1 2013, 5:38pm
                            Don't give up too easily... Otaku-sempai Send a private message to Otaku-sempai May 1 2013, 5:44pm
                                Thanks, but I don't give up so easy... FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin May 1 2013, 5:48pm
                                    I wish you luck! Luinnįr Send a private message to Luinnįr May 2 2013, 12:00pm
                                    Another good hint. LordGawain Send a private message to LordGawain May 21 2013, 12:55am
                                        Sorry for the wait. FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin May 22 2013, 1:54pm
    If you want advice Mr. Arkenstone (isaac) Send a private message to Mr. Arkenstone (isaac) May 7 2013, 9:16pm
        Thanks! FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin May 9 2013, 12:12pm
    I think you should think about a few things like: Escapist Send a private message to Escapist May 21 2013, 1:42am
        Another brilliant post FlamingDovahkiin Send a private message to FlamingDovahkiin May 22 2013, 2:11pm

 
 
 

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