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Silvered-glass
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May 9, 8:37am

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1. Introduction

It is generally known that Tolkien depicted the Valar as angels who were created by the one true God, Eru Ilúvatar. However I have not seen anyone else pose the question "Are the Valar fallen angels?" or, "If the Valar were unfallen angels in Tolkien's mind, were they always that way?" I think there is good reason to think that the Valar as depicted in The Book of Lost Tales at least are fallen angels.

The view that the gods of the pagans are fallen angels has a long history in Christian theology. (See the Second Apology of Justin Martyr.) Tolkien was educated enough that he should have known of this.

The matter of the Valar is a large subject that spans Tolkien's entire writing career and also relates to things outside of Tolkien's writings. This examination was very heavily cut down in scope to avoid getting stuck in laborious tangents and to hopefully make the resulting post more readable. I also added some questions in the end to hopefully stimulate thought and discussion.


2. The Original Valar

The Valar in their original forms appear in the stories narrated by the Elves of Tol Eressëa to the mariner Eriol in The Book of Lost Tales. The original versions of the Valar with their varying and flawed personalities are a colorful bunch, but their actions stray far from how the supposed side of good is supposed to act. In the original stories the Valar pretty much enslave the Noldor to make beautiful gems for the Valar to wear, among other things.

Rather than go through the entire The Book of Lost Tales, I will limit myself to only two further examples in this section, the first of these being the chaining of Melkor. As originally depicted, the misfit Melkor is arguably the victim of the other Valar. In The Book of Lost Tales, after Yavanna and Oromë unilaterally introduce the first (lackluster and haunted) plants, Melkor decides to arrange a lot of volcanic eruptions in Middle-earth. To this noisy destruction (which might also serve to fertilize the disappointing new plants, though the text doesn't speak of that) the Valar respond not with negotiations nor with warnings nor with open war but with a plan involving distinctly unheroic treachery to capture Melkor and put him in prison for three ages. It works because Melkor doesn't expect the treachery. Once the three ages have passed, Melkor gets to be a slave in Valinor.

Much later on, after the Darkening of Valinor, the Valar hold a council to decide what to do next. The first priority of the Valar is reinforcing the defense of Valinor against outside danger. The second priority of the Valar is controlling the movements of the new Sun and Moon. The plight of Middle-earth is not addressed. I think (based on what comes next in the narrative) this could have been in Tolkien's mind the moment in history the Valar officially fell as angels entrusted with taking care of the world.

What comes next is an unusual little story, The Weaving of the Days and Months and of the Years, included in The Book of Lost Tales but never again mentioned in Tolkien's later works. The council of the Valar is interrupted by the unexpected arrival of a trio of strange beings from somewhere who want to weave something for the Valar. The Valar agree to this. After the three all have completed their weavings, the Valar realize that they were tricked:

Then were all the Gods afraid, seeing what was come, and knowing that hereafter even they should in counted time be subject to slow eld and their bright days to waning, until Ilúvatar at the Great End calls them back.

The three beings reveal that they have come from among the Ainur, and then instantaneously return there. It goes without saying (even in the story) that the Valar are unable to pursue the trio.

This all is easily interpreted as Ilúvatar having passed judgement on the Valar and sentenced them to die from old age (a possible allusion to Psalm 82).


3. The New Valar

Then in a new phase in Tolkien's writing it appears that Tolkien for some reason changed his mind about the Valar and wanted to make them (minus Morgoth) as holy and flawless as he could manage without throwing out the entire history of the world that he had already written. (This change to the nature of the Valar coincides with Tolkien starting to refer to the Valar as "the Valar" without translating the word.)

For an example to illustrate the scale of the change, the overall situation is as if if Tolkien had written some drafts of The Lord of the Rings and after much effort had the plot all laid out and then decided that Saruman could not and would not fall, being much too high and pure for something like that. And so in this imaginary scenario Tolkien revised things to remove all trace of Saruman's treachery and character flaws, but still tried to keep as much of the old plot as possible.

I think trying to figure out that one is an interesting thought experiment, but back to the changes to the Valar:

For example, Makar and Mëassë, the most openly evil of the Valar, were removed completely, never to appear in Tolkien's works again.

For another example, Nienna got a radical makeover that changed her from a terrifying death goddess in the vein of Ereshkigal into a personification of pity, something alien to the original Nienna who sent great crowds of mortals into a bleak afterlife. (The concept of the Gift of Men existed, but it appears to originally have been about unpredictable free will, not death.)

But beyond these sorts of localized changes, the entire overarching plot structure was imperiled by the ripple effects of so many important characters suddenly getting new (flat) personalities. Thorny issues arose about why the Valar don't do more to help the world. The original answer was that the Valar had become selfish hedonists who had little care for other beings. The new version instead has the Valar come across as very indecisive and prone to remarkably bad decisions when they actually do something. After all, capable and motivated Valar would have broken the plot into little pieces.

Tolkien's version of the problem of theodicy would be that benevolent and competent Valar are not conductive to dramatic fictional narratives. The original Valar were not particularly benevolent and, with that gone, the reimagined Valar were forced to become (even more) dangerously incompetent to compensate.


4. Conclusion

The above was just scratching the surface of this wide topic, many aspects of which have been largely ignored.

Here are some additional questions to consider:

Q1. What do you think about the changes to the Valar from the literary perspective?

Q2. What do you think about depictions of the Valar from the religious perspective (if that may be asked)? Could Tolkien have been influenced by the Book of Enoch?

Q3. In-universe, do you think it's possible for the different depictions of the Valar to co-exist as products of unreliable narration repeated by people who had never met the Valar or did Tolkien intend for the old versions to be simply discarded? What would have been the real truth behind the unreliable narration?

Q4. In the original version of Túrin Turambar, Hithlum under Melkor's dominion is depicted as a reasonably nice place for humans to live in peace, without the savagery and brutal oppression that would emerge in the later versions. What do you think about this?

Q5. What do you think of the view that in the original tales the conflict is not really between Good and Evil but between Law and Chaos, the Valar representing Law and Melkor representing Chaos?

Q6. How do you feel about the Valar in comparison to the real world mythologies, such as the differences and similarities between Zeus and his counterpart Manwë?

Q7. What about Elbereth and El Berith/Baal Berith? Do you think the similarity between the names is an accident or intended by Tolkien?


noWizardme
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May 12, 8:16am

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I'll confess that I've sort-of tiptoed by this post a few times, hoping someone more knowledgeable about this area will reply. But that won't do really, will it? - I think it's a shame if something as clearly well-researched and thought-out as this gets no replies.


Somebody somewhere knows a lot about the sort of angelic lore Tolkien may well have been familiar with as a medievalist. That's not me. But tryng to interpret the author's intent is one thing and explaining one's reaction to the work is another. Handily, I don't need to know all that theology to do the latter. So here goes.


Angels: I don't see the Valar as exactly equivalent to my ideas of angels. I can see or imagine that there is some angelicness in the 'recipie' if I can pu it that way. The Valar also remind me of a pagan pantheon - the Greco-Roman one or the Norse one being examples, where there are gods with different personalities and 'portfolios' in thegovernment of the world. Very distinct differences from that are, however that the Valar are managing Arada for someone else (Eru). So they tend not to behave as if it's ther eto have fun with (e.g. using humans for sex or scheming the way that the Greco-Roman or the Norse gods to). In fact, all the Valar (except Melkor) are tidily married, whether tht tells us something about Tolkien's attitudes, or whether it was just some after-the-pub fun that got into his notes and is thereafter taken very seriously. At least, as far as I recall, who is married to who has no or almost no significance in Tolkien's tales.



Fallen Angels: Well not fallen in the sense of being kicked out of heaven for rebellion like Milton's Satan. I'd agree with 'fallen' in a sense of 'lessened'; my idea being that by agreeing to 'come down' to an observable reality, maybe the Valar are limited now. Certainly I see their usual posture as one of caution - they don't seem to control everything or always know what to do. In fact, I see them usually taking the precautionary pronciple - waiting to see how things work out and maybe just a cautious nudge here and there (unless Feanor has finally exhausted their patience). Even the Numenorean invasion they stop by appealing for help - and the result is maybe a lot more drastic than they would have dared, even assuming they would have been capable of it.

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Silvered-glass
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May 13, 11:29am

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Somebody somewhere knows a lot about the sort of angelic lore Tolkien may well have been familiar with as a medievalist. That's not me. But tryng to interpret the author's intent is one thing and explaining one's reaction to the work is another. Handily, I don't need to know all that theology to do the latter. So here goes.


Angels: I don't see the Valar as exactly equivalent to my ideas of angels. I can see or imagine that there is some angelicness in the 'recipie' if I can pu it that way. The Valar also remind me of a pagan pantheon - the Greco-Roman one or the Norse one being examples, where there are gods with different personalities and 'portfolios' in thegovernment of the world. Very distinct differences from that are, however that the Valar are managing Arada for someone else (Eru). So they tend not to behave as if it's ther eto have fun with (e.g. using humans for sex or scheming the way that the Greco-Roman or the Norse gods to). In fact, all the Valar (except Melkor) are tidily married, whether tht tells us something about Tolkien's attitudes, or whether it was just some after-the-pub fun that got into his notes and is thereafter taken very seriously. At least, as far as I recall, who is married to who has no or almost no significance in Tolkien's tales.



Fallen Angels: Well not fallen in the sense of being kicked out of heaven for rebellion like Milton's Satan. I'd agree with 'fallen' in a sense of 'lessened'; my idea being that by agreeing to 'come down' to an observable reality, maybe the Valar are limited now. Certainly I see their usual posture as one of caution - they don't seem to control everything or always know what to do. In fact, I see them usually taking the precautionary pronciple - waiting to see how things work out and maybe just a cautious nudge here and there (unless Feanor has finally exhausted their patience). Even the Numenorean invasion they stop by appealing for help - and the result is maybe a lot more drastic than they would have dared, even assuming they would have been capable of it.


This is the relevant Bible passage:

1 And it came to pass, when men began to multiply on the face of the earth, and daughters were born unto them,
2 That the sons of God saw the daughters of men that they were fair; and they took them wives of all which they chose.
3 And the Lord said, My spirit shall not always strive with man, for that he also is flesh: yet his days shall be an hundred and twenty years.
4 There were giants in the earth in those days; and also after that, when the sons of God came in unto the daughters of men, and they bare children to them, the same became mighty men which were of old, men of renown.

-- Genesis 6:1 - 4

(This is just before Noah's Flood.)

This is expanded upon by the Book of Enoch, which is considered a canonical part of the Bible in Ethiopia and referenced in the New Testament.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Book_of_Enoch

The Book of Enoch tells that the Watchers were angels tasked with overseeing the world but chose to rebel and procreate with mortal women, resulting in angel/human hybrids called the Nephilim (the Giants). The Watchers also taught inappropriate knowledge, such as the manufacturing of weapons and makeup. This all got the world in such a bad state that the Flood became necessary to cleanse the world and start again.

The Watchers and the Valar start from a similar basic premise but Tolkien develops the story of the Valar in a different direction. The early versions of the Valar had many children, but in the later versions Tolkien removed that from the story. Even with the early Valar there is no clear mention of Valar having children with anyone other than their legal wives of the same rank. Morgoth shows an interest in Lúthien though, and the birth of Lúthien herself is an example of a Maia/Elf mixture, even if Tolkien shows Lúthien's existence in an entirely positive light rather than as a monster born from Melian's sin.


Otaku-sempai
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May 13, 3:10pm

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Within the canonical legendarium we don't see the Valar reproducing at all, let alone with the Children of Ilúvatar. Their ability to take physical bodies suggests that they could produce children if they really desired it, but that might have serious the serious consequence of limiting a Vala to that physical form (or at least reducing their power) as we see with the Maia Melian.

We do have the known birth of Lúthien from the union of Melian with the Elf-lord Thingol. Tom Bombadil's beloved Goldberry might have herself been the daughter of a Maiar (or of a lesser spirit associated with the Withywindle). Morgoth possibly transformed corrupted Maiar servants to create Boldogs, powerful creatures in the form of huge Orcs. These might have been bred with common Orcs to create a superior breed. We also have Tolkien's Werewolves, Maiar or lesser spirits bonded with the bodies of large wolves or Wargs. I presume that they could breed with other Wargs.

I see the Valar as effectively lesser gods under the One God, Eru lúvatar, with the Mair serving the function of angels. Any Middle-earth equivalent to the Nephilim would be born from unions with the Maiar and the Children of lúvatar. That said, we do not know the origin of the giants of the Misty Mountains or how Morgoth begat the trolls (or even the dragons).

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noWizardme
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May 13, 7:26pm

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Q5. What do you think of the view that in the original tales the conflict is not really between Good and Evil but between Law and Chaos, the Valar representing Law and Melkor representing Chaos?


I'm not really seeing it that way (possibly of course because I haven't understood the question).


I think that teh danger posed by Sauron (or Saruman if he got the Ring and became the new Dark Lord) Is not chaos, but a highly organised project to which everyone and everything must submit. I think Melkor might have been like that too. Even in the mythological time in which the Valar in the story create things an Melkor destroys them, I'm not sure whether destroying things was the end in itself for him, or whether he didn't like the others work because it wasn't his own. When he's got the chance, he does build things. So that's not chaotic as far as I can see at present.

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Felagund
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May 13, 10:33pm

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I haven't picked up my copy of The Book of Lost Tales in what feels like an age - thank you for nudging the Reading Room in that direction. Lots to think about here and I reckon I won't get past initial thoughts in this post!

Your reference to angels also nudged me, in parallel, to Tolkien's Letters, where he regularly and explicitly refers to the Ainur as 'angels' or of 'angelic' nature. He even trots out the Greek root word 'angelos' a couple of times, albeit in the context of the Maiar (Letters 156 & 181). In his secondary world, these beings are 'Powers', 'Emissaries' and (in earlier drafts) 'gods' or at least 'like gods'; yet, outside his creation, Tolkien is clearly comfortable enough to use Christian terminology.

In terms of how Tolkien wrote about 'the fall' and 'fallen', he's often more focused on Elves and, to a lesser extent, Men. Take Letter 131:


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In the cosmogony, there is a fall; a fall of Angels we should say. Though quite different in form, of course, to that of Christian myth... There cannot be any 'story' without a fall - all stories are ultimately about the fall - at least not for human minds as we know them and have them. So, proceeding, the Elves have a fall, before their 'history' can become storial.


The 'fall' in this cosmogony isn't of literal Angels but rather the Children of Eru. Where the Ainur could be seen to fall is apparent in the way Tolkien describes the vulnerability inherent in the mission of the Istari (Letter 181):


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They [the Istari] were also, for the same reason, thus involved in the peril of the incarnate: the possibility of 'fall', of sin, if you will.


And then there's Letter 212, which is a true mithril-lode when it comes to Tolkien's concept of 'fall' in his cosmogony. In that piece, Tolkien further articulates his distinction between 'the Fall' in Christian mythology and 'the fall' in Eä:


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I suppose a difference between this Myth and what may perhaps be called Christian mythology is this. In the latter the Fall of Man is subsequent to and a consequence (though not a necessary consequence) of the 'Fall of Angels': a rebellion of created free-will at a higher level than Man; but it is not clearly held (and in many versions is not held at all) that this affected the 'World' in its nature: evil was brought in from outside, by Satan. In this myth the rebellion that created free-will precedes the creation of the World (Eä); and Eä has in it, subcreatively introduced, evil, rebellions, discordant elements of its own nature already when the Let it Be was spoken. The Fall or corruption, therefore, of all things in it and all inhabitants of it, was a possibility if not inevitable. Trees may 'go bad' as in the Old Forest; Elvers may turn into Orcs, and if this required the special perversive malice of Morgoth, still Elves themselves could do evil deeds. Even the 'good' Valar as inhabiting the world could at least err; as the Great Valar did in their dealings with the Elves; or as the lesser of their kind (as the Istari or wizards) could in various ways become self-seeking. Aulë, for instance,one of the Great, in a sense 'fell'; for he so desired to see the Children, that he became impatient and tried to anticipate the will of the Creator.


Sorry, that's quite a slab quote! It's text that does help me though wrap my head around where Tolkien was (at least in 1958 when he wrote this!) on the concept of 'fall' in his secondary world. My reading of it is that 'falling' was an inherently in-Eä phenomenon and concept. Elves, Men, trees etc were inherently at risk. The 'Angels' of this story, by which I'm referring to the Valar (and not in the sense contained in Letter 131), can only 'fall' once opting to be bound within the world - one that now has 'fall' within its DNA.

Where has all of this left my head then? Probably more along the lines of not seeing the Valar as 'fallen angels' but rather as angels who are at risk of falling. That is, once they enter into the world. I think this is going with the grain of how noWiz put it in his initial reply:


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Fallen Angels: Well not fallen in the sense of being kicked out of heaven for rebellion like Milton's Satan. I'd agree with 'fallen' in a sense of 'lessened'; my idea being that by agreeing to 'come down' to an observable reality, maybe the Valar are limited now.

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Felagund
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May 14, 1:15am

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This is a great question from Silvered-glass and I really like where you've come out in your reply too.

I'd add to this the following reflections on conflict typologies:

Good vs Evil: I reckon Morgoth and Sauron are objectively evil enough as characters, and the Valar sufficiently trying to do Good for me to go with the conflict as describable in these terms.

Law vs Chaos: tricky! There is an order to things, to the extent that even Arda Marred can be interpreted as being 'part of the plan'; and Eru makes it clear to Melkor that everything even he, the mightiest of the Ainur, does still has its "uttermost source" in Eru ('Ainulindalë'). So, even the chaos and destruction that Melkor unleashes takes place in a framework - arguably, another way of talking about Rules, if not Law.

On the Chaos point, 'Myths Transformed' (HoMe X) is informative, I reckon. There, 'chaos' is described as a possible endpoint of Melkor's obsession with destroying everything in Arda that existed separately of him - which, given that Arda was the product of a whole choir-load of Ainur, meant literally everything:


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Melkor could do nothing with Arda, which was not from his own mind and was interwoven with the work and thoughts of others; even left alone he could only go raging on till all was levelled again into a formless chaos.


Which brings me to...

Domination vs Stewardship: Melkor wanted to dominate the wills of others, as did Sauron. The Valar largely seem to see themselves as custodians of Arda, attempting to look out for the well-being of the world and its inhabitants. Gandalf's retort to Denethor that 'he is also a steward' springs to mind here too!

And which brings me back around to 'Myths Transformed'. Wherever Melkor is in the above typologies, as 'Morgoth', whatever he once stood for ends up going out the window. He ends up beyond "rational thought", "enraged by the mere fact of their [other inhabitants of Arda] existence", bent on destruction to the point of "sheer nihilism, and negation". Is this another version of Chaos vs Law? I reckon it's more along the lines of The Megalomaniac is Now Just A Maniac vs This Has Really Got Out of Hand Now.

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noWizardme
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May 14, 5:14am

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Some quick thoughts

The quote about Melkor despising and wishing to destroy the creation of any mind other than his own is a great one. Doesn't mean that he (or Sauron or Saruman) aren't willing to create stuff, but I loved the sense in which this is all futile in a wider view; the universe being fundamentally a collaborative venture*.


I've been trying out the dipole of lawful/unlawful (instead of good/evil or order/chaos). That doesn't work entirely well either though. Superficially, the Valar are, I think, trying to build and maintain Eru's vision (the one they saw in the 'promotional video' before descending to Arda and discovering it will only be like that one day, according to their efforts). Melkor opposes this to an extent (other people's work is trash), but to the extent he builds anything it is in the belief that he is acting independently. But (as pointed out) we're supposed to think that he isn't really - the rebellion is part of the system he believes he's opposing/being independent of.


So maybe there aren't convenient opposites here, because each folds back into the other.


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*This is a bit of a hit and run posting. Our site is becoming near-unusably slow and unstable because of the attentions of often 20,000 'guests' - scraper bots, I assume. Ironic - such is their hunger for anything humans might say that they are jeopardising their own food supply. Anti-Melkoric in that this is a 'love' for the creations of others. And highly Melkoric in that it's all in the pursuit of selfish goals, which are likely to be ultimately self-defeating.

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noWizardme
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May 14, 5:39am

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(Sorry about the Alanis Morisette earworm... https://youtu.be/Jne9t8sHpUc :) )

Tolkien compared with Milton?

I'd love to hear from someone who is very familiar with both.

For myself, I really ought to have a go at 'Paradise Lost' because what I've read about it sounds intriguing.

To whit (who let that owl in?) that Milton makes heaven sound so control-freak creepy that readers are often left with a feeling that Satan's rebellion was understandable. I've seen that linked with Milton's own political stance: in the conflict that Tolkien would have known as 'The English Civil War'* Milton was vehemently against the Divine Rule of Kings which was one of the conflict's causes. But he was writing after the restoration of the Monarchy (which followed a period of over-reach and dictatorship by the monarchy's topplers).

One fascinating critique I read of Paradise Lost was this is a story about failure, and perhaps inspired by the apparent utter failure of Milton's own political hopes: Milton's Satan (inevitably) fails in his rebellion, and then carries on that failure by trying to spoil the world. Adam and Eve fail in living in Eden (though again, the critic I'm thinking of reads Milton's Eden as being so much about control and judgement and so little about grace that you can feel they're better off out of there). But anyway, off they go to try something else, and "The world was all before them, where to choose."

As I say, I am some months or years if at all before reading enough to have my own informed view on this.

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Maybe we have there another set of binaries or dipoles that won't turn out to be such opposites really: God the tyrant versus God the creator of independent wills (which will therefore screw up sometimes, but not so He can go 'look what you made me do') ; Judgement versus Grace etc.


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* A daft name for the period since key events happened in Ireland and in Scotland; and there was more than one war.

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noWizardme
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May 14, 5:47am

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Q1. What do you think about the changes to the Valar from the literary perspective?

Q2. What do you think about depictions of the Valar from the religious perspective (if that may be asked)? Could Tolkien have been influenced by the Book of Enoch?


As with the other questions, I'm not qualified to answer properly.

My sense though is that Tolkien was trying to find a sort of feigned-theological or feigned-cosmological sweet spot.

I think that if his subcreated world felt too obviously Christian or Catholic he started to feel uncomfortable.

And if it felt too dissimilar, he felt uncomfortable too.

See if I can post this before Firefox once again goes "Hmm. We’re having trouble finding that site."

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Ethel Duath
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May 14, 7:21pm

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Perfect. That's it in a (scraped clean) nutshell.

P.S.
Sorry I've been AWOL. I've loved all these discussions, and I wish I could have taken part. Health issues, family and otherwise, narrowed my bandwidth to a mere trickle. Hope to be back here soon!



CuriousG
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May 15, 6:24pm

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While I'll agree that readers (like me) shouldn't jump to literalism to test every "all" statement they see, I also think "all" statements are irresponsible if they don't pass at least one test. If "all" isn't true, then a writer should pick a more accurate word, and "most" is just begging, as Second in Line, to fall into any sentence to replace "all." It's not like you have to dig out an obscure word from Latin or Greek.

And Tolkien is such an assiduous writer, I'm a little surprised he said "all stories are ultimately about the fall," when randomly thinking of Pride and Prejudice, I'm sure someone fell, but the story wasn't about falling. Oedipus Rex was a great fall (tragedies often are). Was each of The Canterbury Tales really about a fall? I'm just not sure why anyone would say that. I have the same reaction to similar statements where you can fill in the blank: "All literature is about love." "All fiction is about pain." "All stories are about self-discovery." Etc.


CuriousG
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CuriousG
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May 15, 6:47pm

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I like the idea of a Law/Chaos dichotomy lens for the Ainur/Melkor and/or Sauron. I see the Dark Lord as tyrants who desire endless control for control's sake, but beneath them their minions indulge in Chaos: orcs pillaging, trolls looting and turning dwarves into jelly, and dragons destroying and hoarding. I think Law represents justice, equality, restraint on vices, and Chaos is the breakdown of all those things, preying upon lawful lands and societies. Remember Shagrat to Gorbag in Shelob's Lair, wanting a few trusty lads to prey upon lawful folks when the war is over?


noWizardme
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May 17, 10:22am

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I think we're conflating Law as a creator of order (it creates rules) and Law as a creator of justice. A tyrant who has captured (or has been able to make himself) the legislature and the courts can do everything he wants legally, with out law being any longer about "justice, equality, restraint on vices..." The resulting society could be very ordered.



As to why Tolkien gives us


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Dark Lord as tyrants who desire endless control for control's sake, but beneath them their minions indulge in Chaos


I suppose that depends on whether you regard Chaos as what you represent (if you are Melkor or Sauron or even Saruman do you have a feigned-cosmological role or job as Chaos or Tyrrany or whatever? )Or is chaos as a tool to use? As Game of Thrones put it - a gaping pit, or a ladder I think it would be possible to make a case for Saruman as a ladder guy, thinking that chaos can be created or exploited for gain. His pitch to Gandalf is that only he, Saruman can offer an escape from the chaos. But it's pretty clear where that will go.

I thin Sauron in the LOTR period doesn't beleive he serves anyone or anything but himself. Whether he is in fact being used as a tool in his turn is arguable.


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(This post was edited by noWizardme on May 17, 10:32am)


CuriousG
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May 17, 7:43pm

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Their view of Chaos is neither [In reply to] Can't Post

at least as I see it. They don't view it as a goal or part of their value system or as a tool. I think they view it as something they don't care about. Their goal is macro-control and subjugation. Conquer Beleriand, Conquer Middle-earth. If orcs run amok after, who cares? All that land on the map is mine now, and that equals control, so I'm happy. What my minions do to my slaves is beneath my concern.


CuriousG
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May 17, 7:47pm

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On the Chaos point, 'Myths Transformed' (HoMe X) is informative, I reckon. There, 'chaos' is described as a possible endpoint of Melkor's obsession with destroying everything in Arda that existed separately of him - which, given that Arda was the product of a whole choir-load of Ainur, meant literally everything


Thanks for digging into it, Felagund. That view of Morgoth's endgame isn't what I was driving at about Chaos, and I won't dispute it. But let's say he conquered all, or all but Aman, or whatever--he conquered most of the world and ruled it as Dark Lord. I think he would rule with an iron fist on the surface, but what happened on a personal scale to the rank & file of his slaves and minions would be chaotic. Whereas I think any honest reader feels like life in Valinor is law-abiding, stable, safe, and in no way chaotic.


Silvered-glass
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May 17, 9:36pm

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The Valar [In reply to] Can't Post

I will now finally give my answers to the questions I posted.


Q1. What do you think about the changes to the Valar from the literary perspective?

I think the more human original Valar work much better as literary characters with their varied personalities.

In the Letter 131, Tolkien explains that with the Valar he wanted to create "beings of the same order of beauty, power, and majesty as the 'gods' of higher mythology" and he wanted to make them so that even a Trinitarian Christian could accept them.

I think the stark good/evil division of the later Valar is implausible because it doesn't reflect how personalities work in the real world. Even Melkor is supposed to have been good once, so why the other Valar would be immune to falling the slightest bit into evil or developing character flaws when Melkor diverged from Eru's plan for him and became hardcore evil for the sake of evil with very little reason?

I suppose Tolkien might have wanted to make the division between good and evil so clear and without any nuance specifically to make the Valar more palatable to Christians, but as a believing Christian myself I don't think the universe works like that, even on the supernatural side.


Q2. What do you think about depictions of the Valar from the religious perspective (if that may be asked)? Could Tolkien have been influenced by the Book of Enoch?

Tolkien supposedly wanted to make his universe compatible with Christianity, but I think he failed with that. I think the Valar should have been fallen angels and quite possibly were fallen angels as originally depicted. I happen to side with Justin Martyr in this pagan god business, so Tolkien pretending that the Valar are holy and good just sits wrong with me, like a fantasy story with no connection to coherent reality or possibly even an attempt to turn black into white.

I think Tolkien had probably heard of the Book of Enoch but took intentionally a different route.

I think I might also mention Tale of Adanel, which is Tolkien's version of the Fall of Man and which makes me find it such a failure on a (particularly) religious level that makes me wonder what Tolkien was thinking when he wrote that story. Tale of Adanel is the Tolkien story with the closest parallels to the Bible, but Tolkien's changes fatally undermine the substance of the story, so that the underlying religious message ends up being the same on only a very superficial reading. (The way to save the story somewhat is to do some creative interpreting, which takes the narrative farther from the Bible story.)


Q3. In-universe, do you think it's possible for the different depictions of the Valar to co-exist as products of unreliable narration repeated by people who had never met the Valar or did Tolkien intend for the old versions to be simply discarded? What would have been the real truth behind the unreliable narration?

Tolkien made use of unreliable narration, but it would be difficult to reconcile someone like Rúmil of Tol Eressëa giving two very contradictory accounts. Unless Tolkien was planning to shift sources around, I think the new Valar should be taken as obsoleting the old versions as far as Tolkien himself was concerned, and I find that regrettable.

The different textual versions themselves could exist quite nicely in the same world. The old versions could be Morgoth's lies. The new versions could be highly sanitized pro-Valar accounts that paper over the inconvenient details.


Q4. In the original version of Túrin Turambar, Hithlum under Melkor's dominion is depicted as a reasonably nice place for humans to live in peace, without the savagery and brutal oppression that would emerge in the later versions. What do you think about this?

Melkor used to be a nuanced character with believable grievances. Then he was turned into a personification of evil and all nuance eradicated. Sigh.


Q5. What do you think of the view that in the original tales the conflict is not really between Good and Evil but between Law and Chaos, the Valar representing Law and Melkor representing Chaos?

The Valar are depicted as being obsessed with ordering the world. The Valar like simple symmetries and perfectly level plains. The Valar's preoccupation with orderliness and unchanging symmetry even extends beyond the Lost Tales material. Melkor in turn breaks tranquil order and symmetry.

From The Book of Lost Tales

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Beneath the very floors of Ossë he caused the Earth to quake and split and his lower fires to mingle with the sea. Vaporous storms and a great roaring of uncontrolled sea-motions burst upon the world, and the forests groaned and snapped. The sea leapt upon the land and tore it, and wide regions sank beneath its rage or were hewn into scattered islets, and the coast was dug into-caverns. The mountains rocked and their hearts melted, and stone poured like liquid fire down their ashen sides and flowed even to the sea, and the noise of the great battles of the fiery beaches came roaring even through the Mountains of Valinor and drowned the singing of the Gods.


I get the impression that the world as designed by the Valar would be a dull and simplistic place and lacking much beauty. The later versions have the same message too, but make the beauty born from Melkor's deeds be a pure accident. This is far more ambiguous with the original Melkor.

The Valar also have a court system while Melkor doesn't bother with such things and just does what he wants. This is not the same as good and evil, as the courts of the Valar were originally depicted as very questionable in dealing out justice.

(Sauron in turn with his strict rules would be the Law that makes the Valar be Chaos in comparison.)


Q6. How do you feel about the Valar in comparison to the real world mythologies, such as the differences and similarities between Zeus and his counterpart Manwë?

Zeus and Manwë have many things in common: the king of the gods, living on top of a high mountain, ruling over the air, associated with eagles. Both are also parts of a powerful male trio with Ulmo/Poseidon ruling over water and Mandos/Hades ruling over the dead.

On the other hand, Zeus has all these stories about him and mortal women (among other things), but Manwë has none of that. Manwë has nothing much to replace that either, which makes Manwë feel like an empty shell without a personality, only some superficial trappings of characterization.

Even the early Valar were sanitized by Tolkien in comparison to real world mythologies, and then Tolkien decided to sanitize the Valar even more, apparently thinking that an improvement. A more civilized and genteel mythology for a more civilized age? The thing is, I don't think the new Valar have the necessary emotional resonance needed for true mythology. Also, The Silmarillion feels simplistic and shallow next to the Bible, though admittedly The Silmarillion is much easier to read.


Q7. What about Elbereth and El Berith/Baal Berith? Do you think the similarity between the names is an accident or intended by Tolkien?

I think the similarity between the Elvish "el" (star/elf) and the Semitic "el" (god) is entirely intentional, and in Tolkien's world the Eldar are meant to be the original and true Elohim, implying that the beautiful and superior Elves were seen as gods by some primitive peoples. The Old Testament mentions the practice of worshiping stars and condemns it.

I think the worship of Elbereth/El Berith/Baal Berith (also condemned in the Old Testament) would have been meant to be a remnant of an earlier age, the age of Tolkien's stories. I think Tolkien's intention was that Elbereth was turned male in the imagination of her believers (something with precedent in the Middle-Eastern religions; for example see Nanna/Inanna) and in later times demonized in the name of monotheism.

This all may seem excessively imaginative, but I have done some research into historical and current world religions, and I think Tolkien derived Sauron and the One Ring from real-world sources(!) much like Tolkien derived the Elves based on mythology and etymology. Therefore more connections to old real-world religions are not impossible at all.

As for Sauron and the One Ring, this post is getting long and I don't want to go on a massive tangent right now, but I can say that the evidence is much better than you might think but depends on connecting various trivia, most of which is somewhat obscure, especially in the West. You can get some idea of how Sauron would have been viewed by his subjects though, and I think that's interesting.


noWizardme
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May 18, 8:02am

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noWizardme
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May 18, 9:00am

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Some answers to your answers! [In reply to] Can't Post

Q1

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I think the stark good/evil division of the later Valar is implausible because it doesn't reflect how personalities work in the real world. Even Melkor is supposed to have been good once, so why the other Valar would be immune to falling the slightest bit into evil or developing character flaws when Melkor diverged from Eru's plan for him and became hardcore evil for the sake of evil with very little reason?

I suppose Tolkien might have wanted to make the division between good and evil so clear and without any nuance specifically to make the Valar more palatable to Christians, but as a believing Christian myself I don't think the universe works like that, even on the supernatural side.



So I think we are left with various readings according to how much a reader expects MIddle-earth or Arda to be like reality, and how much a reader expects it to be like something else - fairy story or Hollywood movie, for example.

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Tolkien made use of unreliable narration, but it would be difficult to reconcile someone like Rúmil of Tol Eressëa giving two very contradictory accounts. Unless Tolkien was planning to shift sources around, I think the new Valar should be taken as obsoleting the old versions as far as Tolkien himself was concerned, and I find that regrettable.

The different textual versions themselves could exist quite nicely in the same world. The old versions could be Morgoth's lies. The new versions could be highly sanitized pro-Valar accounts that paper over the inconvenient details.



I think here you are raising several the complexities of 'canon', an idea to which some members of the fandom (but I'm not thining of you S-G!) are wedded beyond reason, in my opinion.
The next few paragraphs are about the limitations and misunderstandings this causes on this site. They should not be interpreted as a direct response to this thread.
Evidently Tolkien does use unreliable narration - top-of-my-head example; he reassures us in LOTR that of course our hobbit heroes only fall asleep under the standing stone on the Barrow Downs though perfectly normal causes. And I'm sure that he meas the effect I get and probably most readers do- that something else happened (but he is not going to explain exactly what).
All the work Christopher Tokien did on his dad's files shows us beyond any reasonable doubt that (as you mention with the Valar, S-G) JRR changed his mind, or had various contradictory accounts in his files. And on occasion was given to writing out something as a means of exploring it before adding a margin note that it didn't work, or he'd realised it was contradcted by some other thing. Toliken Gateway has (currently at least) a good article about the problems of canonicity, which starts with this quote ...there are Tolkien's latest thoughts, his best thoughts, and his published thoughts and these are not necessarily the same.

Quite.
A further point is that a lot of fandom consists of imagining: if Middle-earth or Arda was real, what would it be like? A fun game, but on occasion people lose sight of the possibility that the answer is either:
  • There is no way of knowing that because Tolkien did not give or clearly imply those details, or;
  • It is left as a deliberate mystery for literary effect
Of course there is a lot that is unknown about the Primary World. But at least here one has several means of discovering more. But nobody can do physics experiments to work out how exactly Gandalf ignites wood. Nobody can go excavate the site of Rivendell. Ther are no 'historical' sources with which to cross-check Tolkien's work.

Now of course any hole or inconsistency can be plugged by a reader or fan inventing stuff. Which of course someone might want to do for the fun of fan fiction, or wargames, or tryng to tie Tolkien to their own political or other worldviews. But if making up your own stuff is there supposed to make the legendarium more pleasingly consistent or complete or canonical then it it's a foolish exercise - the new thing is unlikely to receive general agreement from Fandom, and in any case is most likely to lead to further 'problems'. So for example someone notices that A is consistent with B and invents C to remove the 'problem'. But C is now inconsistent with Z, requiring the fandom invention of D (and so on ad nauseum because D turns out to be inconsistent with...).

In short, I sometimes on this site (but not in response to this particular thread) feel like Woody in the Toy Story scene in which Woody cannot persuade Buzz that he is a toy.


And now, I'll breathe and repeat to myself, 'It's just a story about people with pointy ears and sometimes big hairy feet, I should really just relax."

Ommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm (etc.)
Ahhh, that's beter.
To make a more specific answer to this bit of this thread - I think that yes it is both reasonable reluctantly accept a later draft over an earlier, if we're talking about authorial intention. To me it's a different thing to say that actually, I as a reader rather liked the earlier one. That's nothing to do with canon or trying to find the one True Meaning Of Tolkien (TM) (which as you see I suspect often doesn't exist).

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I get the impression that the world as designed by the Valar would be a dull and simplistic place and lacking much beauty. The later versions have the same message too, but make the beauty born from Melkor's deeds be a pure accident. This is far more ambiguous with the original Melkor.




Accident, or part of the overall feigned-cosmological design? Brian Rosebury (in Tolkien, a Cultural Phenomenon) has a good argument that it's the interplay of Melkor and teh Valar that is supposed to do things.

But, I'll post this much now and go and see if I can find some Rosebury quotes, That way if we get slapped by the bots once more (Shocked) I won't lose all my work.

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noWizardme
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May 18, 9:11am

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On the idea that the conflict between the Valar and Melkor achieves somethiing that neither side would on its own, and which neither of them predicted. And that may be how it works:

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… the Ainur are not simply tools or extensions of God’s power, as puppets or zombies or machines would be: as independent minds, they have to learn gradually what to do and how to collaborate (hence the emphasis on the slow growth in understanding of their brethren). Though each of them is invested with native powers by lúvatar, their music is not a product of the aggregate of those powers, but of the synthesis of their powers which they achieve. Their function is therefore deliberately made to resemble human creativity, with its requirements of learning and discipline and intuition as well as direct divine inspiration', and its necessarily collective and traditional aspects. They are in fact 'sub-creators', to use Tolkien's own term for human artists.


One consequence of the use of intermediaries is that highly specific features of the world are conceived as the outcome of both intentional and unintentional collaboration among sub-creators.


And Ilúvatar spoke to Ulmo, and said: 'Seest thou not how here in this. little realm in the Deeps of Time Melkor hath made war upon thy province? He hath bethought him of bitter cold immoderate, and yet hath not destroyed the beauty of thy fountains, nor thy clear pools.
Behold the snow, and the cunning work of frost! Melkor hath devised heats and fire without restraint, and hath not dried up thy desire nor utterly quelled the music of the sea. Behold rather the height and glory of the clouds, and the everchanging mists; and listen to the fall of rain upon the Earth! And in these clouds thou art drawn nearer to Manwe, thy friend, whom thou lovest.'



The distinctive feature of Tolkien's myth here is that, from the point of view of Ulmo and Manwe, the first snowflake is at once a product of their own actions and a delightful surprise, and this is a deeply attractive picture of creation - more attractive, I think, than the production of the snowflake by God's immediate fiat would be.

Rosebury - Ch 5 of Tolkien, a Cultural Phenomenon. Palgrave Macmillan, 2003


Rosebury's book has a lot of excellent material, including a lot more about these ideas. I heartily recommend it.

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Felagund
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May 18, 4:03pm

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interesting references [In reply to] Can't Post

Thanks for the reference to Brian Rosebury's book - I hadn't come across it before now and it sounds like a good read. Also love the quote from that Tolkien Gateway entry, ta for posting that too!

Welcome to the Mordorfone network, where we put the 'hai' back into Uruk


noWizardme
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May 18, 5:06pm

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Or, possibly that's a large hill in Yorkshire. But anyway his book is very good. I think squire recommened it to me originally, in this very forum.

Tolkien Gateway is quoting a collection of essays, sadly without saying which contributor came up with that particular cracker. That also looks like a good book, but is priced for academic libraries.

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Felagund
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May 18, 5:44pm

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brands of Darklordism: there's mad & bad and then there's Morgoth mad & bad! [In reply to] Can't Post

Ah, I see what you mean - ta for coming back on this!

In the same section of 'Myths Transformed', Tolkien also noted that:


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Morgoth would no doubt, if he had been victorious, have ultimately have destroyed even his own 'creatures', such as the Orcs, when they had served his sole purpose in using them: the destruction of Elves and Men.


That's way hypothetical endgame stuff, it's true. Yet, in this conceptualisation of things, even Morgoth's own chaotic soldiery would have been sacrificed on the altar of nihilist purity. Not just tools, to be discarded when no longer needed, but wiped out in an insane drive for an impossible 'reset' to primordiality. Sauron's brand of 'Darklordism', on the other hand, strikes me as fitting your model very well though.

And yes, Valinor sounds like a much nicer, safer etc place to live, at just about every point in the history of Arda! Despite all that whining from Fëanor about the Valar making thralls of the Noldor.

Welcome to the Mordorfone network, where we put the 'hai' back into Uruk


CuriousG
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May 18, 5:47pm

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Reading Room discussion of Rosebury [In reply to] Can't Post

Way back in 2012 there was a robust discussion of Rosebury here, if anyone is interested.

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