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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 1:54am
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There’s No O in “Gundabad” (suggestions, part 3)
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[Bilbo:] “I feel a bit faint.”
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[Bilbo:] “Uh, yeah … Feel a bit faint.”
[Bilbo:] “Air, I need air.”
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[Bilbo:] “Air, I—I—I need air.”
AFTER:
[Bofur:] “Flash of light, searing pain, then Poof! you’re nothing more than a pile of ash.”
ADD:
[Bilbo:] “Hmm.”
[Bilbo:] “No.”
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[Bilbo:] “Nope.”
[Gandalf:] “You’re very helpful, Bofur.”
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[Gandalf:] “Ah, very helpful, Bofur.”
OR >>>
[Gandalf:] “Not very helpful, Bofur.”
[Bilbo:] “I’ll be alright, let me just sit quietly for a moment.”
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[Bilbo:] “I’ll be all right, let me just sit quietly for a moment.”
[Gandalf:] “You’ve been sitting quietly for far too long. Tell me; when did doilies and your mother’s dishes become so important to you? I remember a young Hobbit who always was running off in search of elves and the woods, who would stay out late, and come home after dark, trailing mud and twigs and fireflies. A young Hobbit who would have liked nothing better than to find out what was beyond the borders of the Shire. The world is not in your books and maps; it’s out there.”
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[Gandalf:] “You’ve been sitting quietly for far too long. Tell me; when did doilies and your mother’s dishes become so important to you? I remember a young Hobbit who always was running off in search of elves and woods, who’d stay out late, come home after dark, trailing mud and twigs and fireflies. A young Hobbit who would have liked nothing better than to find out what was beyond the borders of the Shire. The world is not in your books and maps; it’s out there.”
[Bilbo:] “I can’t just go running off into the blue. I am a Baggins, of Bag End.”
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[Bilbo:] “I can’t just go running off into the blue. I am a Baggins, mm, of Bag End.”
[The dwarves gather in Bilbo’s living room, smoking their pipes by the fire. They all begin humming, and soon Thorin begins to sing, and the others join him. Gandalf listens from nearby; Bilbo listens from his bedroom.]
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[The dwarves gather in Bilbo’s living room, smoking their pipes by the fire. They all begin humming, and soon Thorin begins to sing, and the others join him (on the second stanza below). Gandalf listens from nearby; Bilbo listens from his bedroom.]
[The dwarves, singing:]
“Far over the Misty Mountains cold
To dungeons deep and caverns old
We must away ere break of day
To find our long-forgotten gold
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[The dwarves, singing:]
“Far over the misty mountains cold
To dungeons deep and caverns old
We must away ere break of day
To find our long-forgotten gold
TO MATCH TOLKIEN’S CAPITALIZATION
[It is morning. Bilbo wakes up on his bed, and suddenly realizes that his house is very quiet. He walks all [[…]] up completely from the mess of the party last night, almost as if it had never happened.]
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[It is morning. Bilbo wakes up on his bed, saying, “mm, oh”, and suddenly realizes that his house is very [[…]] up completely from the mess of the party last night, almost as if it had never happened.]
[Neighbor:] “You! Mr. Bilbo! Where are you off to?”
[Bilbo:] “Can’t stop, I’m already late!”
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[Neighbor:] “Hey! Mr. Bilbo! Where are you off to?”
[Bilbo:] “I [?] can’t stop, I’m already late!”
[The dwarves are riding their ponies, and Gandalf his horse, down a path through a wooded area. Bilbo runs up from behind them.]
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[The dwarves are riding their ponies, and Gandalf his horse, down a path through a wooded area. A few words of their conversation are heard, including “waste of time” and “use a hobbit”. Bilbo runs up from behind them.]
[The dwarves shout “Woah!” and stop their ponies. Bilbo catches up to them and hands Balin the contract.]
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[Some dwarves call “Whoa!” and stop their ponies. Bilbo catches up to them and hands Balin the contract.]
[Bilbo:] “No, no, no, that won’t be necessary. I’m sure I can keep up on foot. I- I- I’ve done my fair share of walking holidays, you know. I even got as far as Frogmorton once - WAGH!”
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[Bilbo:] “No, no, no, no, that—that won’t be necessary, thank you, but I—I’m sure I can keep up on foot. I—I—I’ve done my fair share of, uh, walking holidays, you know. I even got as far as Frogmorton once—WAGH!”
AFTER:
[Oin:] “Come on, Nori, pay up.”
ADD:
[Oin?:] “Go on.”
AFTER:
[Nori tosses a sack of money to Oin; sacks of money begin passing between the dwarves.]
ADD:
[Oin?:] “Hey, hey, hey!”
[Some of the dwarves laugh.]
AFTER:
[Bilbo:] “What did you think?”
ADD:
[Gandalf:] “Hmm.”
[Bilbo:] “All this horse hair, I’m having a reaction.”
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[Bilbo:] “Ohh. All this horse hair, I’m having a reaction.”
[Bilbo:] “No, wait, wait, stop! Stop! We have to turn around.”
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[Bilbo:] “No, no, wait, wait, stop! Stop! We have to turn around.”
REGARDING:
[Bofur pulls a filthy handkerchief out of his pocket and tosses it to Bilbo.]
DOESN’T BOFUR TEAR A STRIP OF CLOTH FROM SOMETHING?
[Dwalin:] “Move out.”
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[Dwalin:] “Move on [?].”
[Bilbo:] “How are you, girl? That’s a good girl. It’s our little secret, Myrtle; you must tell no one.”
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[Bilbo:] “Hello, girl? That’s a good girl. It’s our little secret, Myrtle; you must tell no one, sh, sh.”
[Bilbo hears a strange noise in the night air and becomes worried. He runs over to Fili and Kili.]
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[Bilbo hears a scream in the night air and becomes worried. He runs over to Fili and Kili.]
AFTER:
[Kili:] “Orcs.”
ADD:
[Another scream is heard.]
[Balin:] “Moria had been taken by legions of Orcs lead by the most vile of all their race: Azog, the Defiler. The giant Gundobad Orc had sworn to wipe out the line of Durin. He began by beheading the King.”
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[Balin:] “Moria had been taken by legions of Orcs lead by the most vile of all their race: Azog, the Defiler. The giant Gundabad Orc had sworn to wipe out the line of Durin. He began by beheading the King.”
[Balin:] “He stood alone against this terrible foe, his armor rent, wielding nothing by an oaken branch as a shield”
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[Balin:] “He stood alone against this terrible foe, his armor rent … wielding nothing by an oaken branch as a shield”
IT’S A LOOONG PAUSE
[Azog is rushed into Moria by other orcs; Thorin, yelling “Du Bekâr! Du Bekâr!” (translated: ‘To arms! To arms!’), rallies the dwarves to battle. [[…]] The dwarves now seem to have the advantage.]
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[Azog is rushed into Moria by other orcs; Thorin, yelling “Du Bekâr! Du Bekâr!” (not translated onscreen: ‘To arms! To arms!’), rallies the dwarves to battle. [[…]] The dwarves now seem to have the advantage.]
[Balin:] “Our forces rallied and drove the orcs back. Our enemy had been defeated. But there was no feast, nor song, that night, for our dead were beyond the count of grief. We few had survived.”
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[Balin:] “Our forces rallied and drove the orcs back. Our enemy had been defeated. But there was no feast, no [?] song, that night, for our dead were beyond the count of grief. We few had survived.”
[Dori:] “Mr. Gandalf, can’t you do something about this deluge?”
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[Dori:] “Here, Mr. Gandalf, can’t you do something about this deluge?”
REGARDING:
[Gandalf:] “There are five of us. The greatest of our order is Saruman, the White. Then there are the two Blue wizards; you know, I’ve quite forgotten their names.”
MAKE IT “Blue Wizards” OR “blue wizards”, WITH CONSISTENT CAPITALIZATION
[Radagast:] “Witchcraft. Oh, but it is. A dark and powerful magic.”
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[Radagast:] “Witchcraft. But it is. A dark and powerful magic.”
[Radagast:] “Lerya laman naiquentallo [translated: Free the animal from the curse]. Sí a hlare ómaquettar [Now hear words of my voice] Na coilerya en-vinyanta [Be its life renewed]. Sí a hlare ómaquettar. Na coilerya en-vinyanta.”
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[Radagast:] “Lerya laman naiquentallo [not translated onscreen: Free the animal from the curse]. Sí a hlare ómaquettar [Now hear words of my voice] Na coilerya en-vinyanta [Be its life renewed]. Sí a hlare ómaquettar. Na coilerya en-vinyanta.”
[His bird flies to him, and he somehow converses with it.]
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[His bird flies to him, and he converses with it.]
[Thorin:] “Oin, Gloin, get a fire going.”
[Gloin:] “Right you are.”
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[Thorin:] “Oin, Gloin.”
[Gloin?:] “Aye?”
[Thorin:] “Get a fire going.”
[Gloin:] “Right you are.”
[Gandalf:] “Why not? The elves could help us. We could get rest, food, advice.”
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[Gandalf:] “Why not? The elves could help us. We could get food, rest, advice.”
[Thorin:] “We do not need their advice.”
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[Thorin:] “I do not need their advice.”
[Gandalf:] “We have a map which we cannot read. Lord Elrond could help us.”
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[Gandalf:] “We have a map that we cannot read. Lord Elrond could help us.”
[Bilbo:] “Everything alright? Gandalf, where are you going?”
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[Bilbo:] “Everything all right? Gandalf, where are you going?”
[Bilbo:] “Who’s that?”
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[Bilbo:] “But who’s that?”
REGARDING:
[Fili:] “Only we’ve encountered a slight problem. We had sixteen. Now there’s fourteen.”
COULD IT BE KILI WHO SAYS “We had sixteen”?
[Bilbo:] “Well, that’s not good. That is not good at all. Shouldn’t we tell Thorin?”
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[Bilbo:] “Well, that’s not good. Heh, heh. And[?] that is not good at all. Shouldn’t we tell Thorin?”
[Bilbo:] “Well, uh...look, something big uprooted these trees.”
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[Bilbo:] “Well, uh...look, some—something big uprooted these trees.”
[As Fili sees a light, the three of them quietly run through the forest toward it, and they hide behind a log when they realize that it is a fire. Harsh laughter sounds from near the fire.]
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[As the three of them quietly run through the forest toward the light Fili has seen, and they hide behind a log when they realize that it is a fire. Harsh laughter sounds from near the fire.]
SINCE YOU ALREADY QUOTED FILI’S DIALOGUE ABOUT THE LIGHT
[Kili:] “Yes; you should. Mountain trolls are slow and stupid, and you’re so small, they’ll never see you.”
[Bilbo:] “No, no, no...”
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[Kili:] “Yes; you should. Mountain trolls are slow and stupid, and you’re so small.”
[Bilbo:] “N—n—no—”
[Kili:] “They’ll never see you.”
[Bilbo:] “No, no, no...”
[Fili:] “If you run into trouble, hoot twice like a barn owl, once like a brown owl.”
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[Fili:] “If you run into trouble, hoot twice like a barn owl, and [?] once like a brown owl.”
[Bilbo:] “Twice like a barn owl, once like a brown...? Are you sure this is a good idea?”
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[Bilbo:] “Twice like a barn owl, twice like a brown—once like a brown? Are you sure this is a good idea?”
[William:] “I don’t like horse. I never have. Not enough fat on them.”
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[William:] “Oh, I don’t like ’orse. I never ’ave. Not enough fat on them.”
[Bert:] “Well, it’s better than the little old farmer. All skin and bone, he was. I’m still picking bits of him out of me teeth.”
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[Bert:] “Well, it’s better than [indistinguishable] old farmer. All skin and bone, he was. I’m still picking bits of him out of me teeth.”
I DON’T THINK THE PHRASE IS “little old”
[Bert:] “Well, that’s lovely, it is, a floater.”
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[Bert:] “Oh, that’s lovely, that is, a floater.”
[Tom:] “It might improve the flavor!”
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[Tom:] “Oh, might improve the flavor!”
[He begins to sneeze more, but Bert grabs him by the nose. Bilbo, unseen, get behind them.]
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[He begins to sneeze more, but Bert grabs him by the nose. Bilbo, unseen, gets behind them.]
AFTER:
[Bert throws William down.]
ADD:
[William:] “Ow! Ow! Ow!”
[William:] “I hope you’re going to gut these nags. But I like the stinky parts.”
>>>
[William:] “I hope you’re gonna gut these nags. I don’t like the stinky parts.”
[Tom:] “I’m starving! Are we having horse tonight or what?”
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[Tom:] “I’m starving! Are we ’aving horse tonight or what?”
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IncredibleSmaug
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Jan 11 2013, 7:07pm
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Thanks
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Rane
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Jan 11 2013, 7:33pm
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Thanks! Might be a mistake though -
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Loresilme
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Jan 11 2013, 7:38pm
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Fixed!
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IncredibleSmaug
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Jan 11 2013, 7:44pm
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You're quick!
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Loresilme
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Jan 11 2013, 7:56pm
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They should just make you a co-editor so you can correct the mistakes you find
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Magpie
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Jan 11 2013, 8:00pm
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lol! Thanks for the character reference ;-)
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Loresilme
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Jan 11 2013, 8:05pm
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Thanks! It's a group effort!
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IncredibleSmaug
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Jan 11 2013, 10:38pm
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Excellent work!
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TheBladeGlowsBlue
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Jan 11 2013, 10:46pm
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Nope, I'm certain it's a snail
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Daniel James
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Jan 12 2013, 12:30am
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I stand corrected.
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TheBladeGlowsBlue
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Jan 12 2013, 10:46am
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If the thrush can wake Smaug ...
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DanielLB
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Jan 12 2013, 1:12pm
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Surely you can see the significance here...
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TheBladeGlowsBlue
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That, and...
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I understand the significance ....
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DanielLB
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Jan 12 2013, 1:32pm
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I'm confused...
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TheBladeGlowsBlue
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Jan 12 2013, 1:36pm
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Oh, I meant when they arrived at the secret door
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DanielLB
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Jan 12 2013, 2:41pm
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Thanks a bunch!
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Daniel James
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Jan 12 2013, 12:35am
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Just a few more for you...
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Eleniel
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Jan 12 2013, 7:55am
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I think it is "West Nags"
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DanielLB
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Jan 12 2013, 6:03pm
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'nags' is certainly right...
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Eleniel
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Jan 14 2013, 11:27am
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I thought 'nag' was a colloquialism for 'horse' in general?//
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kiwifan
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Jan 15 2013, 12:52am
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Probably today
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DanielLB
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Jan 15 2013, 10:22am
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Definitions I have found for nag now that you made me research it ;-)
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kiwifan
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Jan 15 2013, 11:28am
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I thought nag was what women do :P
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imin
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Jan 15 2013, 11:33am
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Ha! That is also true ;-) /
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DanielLB
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Jan 15 2013, 12:26pm
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@ imin and DanielLB
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kiwifan
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Jan 15 2013, 10:47pm
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Thanks! Updated the transcript.
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Daniel James
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Jan 12 2013, 8:26pm
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It's definitely squirrel. A quibble isn't an animal! /
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DanielLB
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Jan 12 2013, 8:30pm
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But who could mistake Bilbo for a squirrel?
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Daniel James
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Jan 12 2013, 9:20pm
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I don't think we should be too concerned by Trolls' knowledge of animals
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DanielLB
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Jan 12 2013, 9:25pm
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Just found a very short clip from the Trolls scene on YT...
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Eleniel
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Jan 12 2013, 10:23pm
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I can never make out whether it's...
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DanielLB
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Jan 11 2013, 7:47pm
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Definition
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Loresilme
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Jan 11 2013, 7:54pm
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Dowry
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TheRealBeren
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Jan 11 2013, 8:30pm
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Here's the link to the definition
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Loresilme
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Jan 11 2013, 8:38pm
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This is so well-done!
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Loresilme
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Jan 11 2013, 8:06pm
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Thanks many times over for this!!!//
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Radagast-Aiwendil
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Jan 11 2013, 9:08pm
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"nerves to pray for time"
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dave_lf
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Jan 11 2013, 10:42pm
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I think in another thread
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DanielLB
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Jan 11 2013, 10:47pm
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So that line is: "He had the nous to play for time." //
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Loresilme
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Jan 11 2013, 10:54pm
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Fixed that too!
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IncredibleSmaug
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Jan 11 2013, 10:59pm
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Many thanks! //
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Loresilme
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Jan 11 2013, 11:07pm
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I'm certain it's nous...
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dormouse
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Jan 11 2013, 11:16pm
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Excellent effort - thanks!
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Eleniel
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Jan 11 2013, 11:10pm
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And another...
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Eleniel
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Jan 11 2013, 11:25pm
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The correct quote is:
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DanielLB
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Jan 11 2013, 11:28pm
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Aha!
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Eleniel
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Jan 11 2013, 11:32pm
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Fixed both!
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IncredibleSmaug
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Jan 11 2013, 11:41pm
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"Middle-earth" always should be so spelled.
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 11 2013, 11:43pm
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Mungo it is!
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Daniel James
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Jan 12 2013, 3:07am
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wonderful thanks! //
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Xanaseb
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Jan 12 2013, 12:09am
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You're amazing!
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Nienna
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Jan 12 2013, 12:41am
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Hummingbird?
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Aragalen the Green
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Jan 12 2013, 5:17pm
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Maybe this thread needs re-visited
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DanielLB
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Jan 12 2013, 5:31pm
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some slight mistakes
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ArchedCory
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Jan 12 2013, 8:24pm
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Ian Holm’s Odd Pronunciations? (suggestions, part 1)
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 1:47am
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According to "skep"
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SirDennisC
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Jan 14 2013, 3:50am
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Yes, all transcriptions I've seen so far have errors.
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 4:16am
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Your efforts are greatly appreciated.
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SirDennisC
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Jan 14 2013, 4:35am
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That works for me.
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 5:47am
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I would imagine that the reason people think it is "Jackson"
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Eleniel
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Jan 14 2013, 11:14am
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Wow
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Gelir
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Jan 14 2013, 4:41am
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Wrath...
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Eleniel
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Jan 14 2013, 11:10am
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Wrath it is :)
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Gelir
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Jan 15 2013, 5:43am
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Part 1 Corrected!
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IncredibleSmaug
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Jan 14 2013, 10:43am
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Something no one seems to have noticed
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kiwifan
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Jan 15 2013, 11:16pm
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Whoops! Corrected
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Daniel James
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Jan 16 2013, 5:31am
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Thanks for letting me know!
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kiwifan
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Jan 16 2013, 11:31pm
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All right. Bebother the Gates of Yore (suggestions, part 2)
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 1:52am
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Gelir
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Jan 14 2013, 4:53am
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There’s No O in “Gundabad” (suggestions, part 3)
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 1:54am
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Comments in red
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Gelir
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Jan 14 2013, 5:07am
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Good catch: "but an oaken shield" not "by an oaken shield".
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 5:44am
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marillaraina
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Jan 15 2013, 9:12am
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Leathery!
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Gelir
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Jan 15 2013, 5:28am
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Ah, good thought! //
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 15 2013, 5:45am
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It’s a Horde, It’s a Plane! (suggestions, part 4)
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 1:55am
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Tastes like chicken.
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Aragalen the Green
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Jan 14 2013, 2:16am
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Very close.
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 2:32am
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Ah, I got it.
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Aragalen the Green
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Jan 14 2013, 2:39am
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Gelir
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Jan 14 2013, 5:19am
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Squirrel dung!
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Eleniel
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Jan 14 2013, 11:31am
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Bless Us and Splash Us! You Are Not Alone. (suggestions, part 5)
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 1:56am
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Gelir
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Jan 14 2013, 5:24am
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It’s Quite Quiet, So Wring the Bell. (suggestions, part 6)
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 1:58am
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Gelir
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Jan 14 2013, 5:31am
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Thanks a ton!
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Daniel James
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Jan 14 2013, 3:24pm
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So you're here, as well! And under your own name, too!
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kiwifan
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Jan 15 2013, 12:45am
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I'll mention this here, rather than make a thread: An odd response from Bilbo, perhaps?
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DanielLB
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Jan 14 2013, 11:13am
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Possibly he deduces from Bofur's vivid description -
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Eleniel
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Jan 14 2013, 11:17am
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But he asked what beast?
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DanielLB
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Jan 14 2013, 11:19am
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Not just you.
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 14 2013, 4:02pm
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Actually I think it makes sense
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Gelir
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Jan 15 2013, 5:38am
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This is GREAT
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Elvanui
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Jan 18 2013, 7:50pm
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Good ear.
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N.E. Brigand
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Jan 19 2013, 7:59am
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Oh, nice :)
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Elvanui
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Jan 19 2013, 12:16pm
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