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The narrator does exactly what you suggest

Curious
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Aug 25 2010, 3:37pm


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when Merry stabs the Witchking, explaining why Merry's blade was so effective.


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And still Meriadoc the hobbit stood there blinking through his tears and no one spoke to him, indeed none seemed to heed him. He brushed away the tears, and stooped to pick up the green shield that Éowyn had given him; and he slung it at his back. Then he looked for his sword that he had let fall; for even as he struck his blow his arm was numbed, and now he could only use his left hand. And behold! there lay his weapon, but the blade was smoking like a dry branch that has been thrust in a fire; and as he watched it, it writhed and withered and was consumed.

So passed the sword of the Barrow-downs, work of Westernesse. But glad would he have been to know its fate who wrought it slowly long ago in the North-kingdom when the Dúnedain were young, and chief among their foes was the dread realm of Angmar and its sorcerer king. No other blade, not though mightier hands had wielded it, would have dealt that foe a wound so bitter, cleaving the undead flesh, breaking the spell that knit his unseen sinews to his will.


Similarly, the narrator gives us Shelob's point of view when Sam fights her:


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For Sam still stood upon his feet, and dropping his own sword, with both hands he held the elven-blade point upwards, fending off that ghastly roof; and so Shelob, with the driving force of her own cruel will, with strength greater than any warrior's hand, thrust herself upon a bitter spike. Deep, deep it pricked, as Sam was crushed slowly to the ground.

No such anguish had Shelob ever known, or dreamed of knowing, in all her long world of wickedness. Not the doughtiest soldier of old Gondor, nor the most savage Orc entrapped, had ever thus endured her, or set blade to her beloved flesh. A shudder went through her. Heaving up again, wrenching away from the pain, she bent her writhing limbs beneath her and sprang backwards in a convulsive leap. ...

Even as Sam himself crouched, looking at her, seeing his death in her eyes, a thought came to him, as if some remote voice had spoken. and he fumbled in his breast with his left hand, and found what he sought: cold and hard and solid it seemed to his touch in a phantom world of horror, the Phial of Galadriel. ...

As if his indomitable spirit had set its potency in motion, the glass blazed suddenly like a white torch in his hand. It flamed like a star that leaping from the firmament sears the dark air with intolerable light. No such terror out of heaven had ever burned in Shelob's face before. The beams of it entered into her wounded head and scored it with unbearable pain, and the dreadful infection of light spread from eye to eye. She fell back beating the air with her forelegs, her sight blasted by inner lightnings, her mind in agony. Then turning her maimed head away, she rolled aside and began to crawl, claw by claw, towards the opening in the dark cliff behind.



Even earlier in Book I, when Frodo was alone with the Barrow Wight, the narrator was capable of explaining things to the reader that Frodo did not know:


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But though his fear was so great that it seemed to be part of the very darkness that was round him, he found himself as he lay thinking about Bilbo Baggins and his stories, of their jogging along together in the lanes of the Shire and talking about roads and adventures. There is a seed of courage hidden (often deeply, it is true) in the heart of the fattest and most timid hobbit, wailing for some final and desperate danger to make it grow. Frodo was neither very fat nor very timid; indeed, though he did not know it, Bilbo (and Gandalf) had thought him the best hobbit in the Shire. He thought he had come to the end of his adventure, and a terrible end, but the thought hardened him. He found himself stiffening, as if for a final spring; he no longer felt limp like a helpless prey.


So the narrator is perfectly capable of offering explanations unknown to the characters at that time. (You can still, if you like, assume that the hobbits added the commentary later, or that the modern translator added it for the benefit of modern readers.) But Tolkien chose not to do so at Weathertop. And that, I judge, is a failing, for although we can construct reasons for the Riders' behavior, the only reason offered in the narrative, by Strider, is at best incomplete, and at worst just wrong.

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Book I, Chapter 11, “A Knife in the Dark”: Are Black Riders Wimps? Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 23 2010, 2:02am
    My own thoughts Lord of Magic Send a private message to Lord of Magic Aug 23 2010, 2:20pm
        Good point about Bombadil talking to ponies! Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 23 2010, 4:03pm
        Let me know if you find Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 23 2010, 4:17pm
    Horn calls, commerce, and Wimpy Black Riders Jerene Send a private message to Jerene Aug 23 2010, 2:51pm
        Thanks for acknowledging Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 23 2010, 4:14pm
            Unanswerable Questions Jerene Send a private message to Jerene Aug 23 2010, 9:26pm
        Not 3.6, but 6 pennies sador Send a private message to sador Aug 25 2010, 2:28pm
    Great summary and analysis, Curious FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 23 2010, 5:27pm
        Okay, here's a closer analysis of the timing in Buckland. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 23 2010, 6:13pm
            Nazgul as cowards Arwen Skywalker Send a private message to Arwen Skywalker Aug 23 2010, 7:27pm
                There is an element of ghosts afraid of the light. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 23 2010, 8:32pm
                    Gandalf and the High Elves FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 23 2010, 10:40pm
                        Taking the ring from Frodo CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 24 2010, 11:56am
                            It wouldn't take long Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 24 2010, 12:07pm
                Nazgul and fear of fire CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 24 2010, 12:17pm
                    I can explain Minas Tirith. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 24 2010, 12:43pm
                        I'm guessing element of surprise xy Aug 24 2010, 3:31pm
                            Good point about the Riders being tired, Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 24 2010, 4:33pm
                                On the other hand; and, Bombadil and the Siege of Imladris CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 24 2010, 5:06pm
                                    Old Man Willow and the Barrow-wights Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 24 2010, 5:27pm
                                        Bombadil and the war... Evernight Send a private message to Evernight Aug 24 2010, 6:25pm
                                            Could be. Interesting. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 24 2010, 7:00pm
                                            Excellent point CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 24 2010, 7:28pm
                                Another point xy Aug 24 2010, 6:39pm
                                    It's also tricky Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 24 2010, 7:06pm
                                        It's frustrating Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 24 2010, 7:23pm
                                            At the very least CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 24 2010, 7:34pm
                                                And maybe Tolkien Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 24 2010, 7:55pm
                                            I think there are hints FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 25 2010, 10:35am
                                                The definitive essay! CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 25 2010, 2:13pm
                                                    That's not what bothers me sador Send a private message to sador Aug 25 2010, 2:26pm
                                                        Wasn't there a prophecy? FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 26 2010, 11:37am
                                                            Who issued this prophesy? Elizabeth Send a private message to Elizabeth Aug 27 2010, 7:18am
                                                                Good question. FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 27 2010, 8:21am
                                                    The Riders seemed to open Fatty's gate Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 25 2010, 4:32pm
                                                    Thanks, CuriousG! FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 26 2010, 11:58am
                                                        A wooden shield Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 26 2010, 2:58pm
                                                The narrator does exactly what you suggest Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 25 2010, 3:37pm
                                        well xy Aug 26 2010, 5:41pm
            Timelines FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 23 2010, 10:18pm
                I agree about the horn Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 23 2010, 11:26pm
                    Maybe you're right FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 24 2010, 9:04am
        Oh, how to explain those Nazgul CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 23 2010, 7:54pm
            It's also revealing Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 23 2010, 10:14pm
    Who were the culprits in the attack in the inn? CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 23 2010, 7:30pm
        Here's what Strider said: Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 23 2010, 8:25pm
            Nazgul or Ferny CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 24 2010, 12:05pm
                There's also the question Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 24 2010, 12:38pm
                    Good point CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 24 2010, 12:48pm
                    However, that very night sador Send a private message to sador Aug 25 2010, 2:51pm
                        Good point. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 25 2010, 4:49pm
            Not Bakshi. sador Send a private message to sador Aug 25 2010, 2:47pm
                Your second link doesn't work. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 25 2010, 4:47pm
                    Does this one? sador Send a private message to sador Aug 27 2010, 11:52am
                        If your point is that we can't be sure, Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 27 2010, 12:34pm
                        Bolsters and other thoughts Elizabeth Send a private message to Elizabeth Aug 27 2010, 10:08pm
    Comments on the Summary sador Send a private message to sador Aug 24 2010, 9:41am
    Frodo: the exceptional hobbit and hero CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 24 2010, 12:40pm
        Frodo is an exceptional hobbit. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 24 2010, 1:11pm
    Comments on your Analysis sador Send a private message to sador Aug 25 2010, 10:53am
        A thought about "Peregrin." Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 25 2010, 4:21pm
    Comments on your Analysis - part II sador Send a private message to sador Aug 25 2010, 2:15pm
        There are hints Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 25 2010, 4:43pm
            Did the Riders know that Frodo would take off the Ring? sador Send a private message to sador Aug 25 2010, 7:15pm
                Not nonexistent. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 25 2010, 8:10pm
    "...with timbers burst and lock broken" squire Send a private message to squire Aug 25 2010, 6:00pm
        Great point about the Nazgul as police. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 25 2010, 8:01pm
            Inside information FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 25 2010, 9:57pm
        There's no fist... FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 25 2010, 9:35pm
            Right, no fist mentioned, but how far can you take that? squire Send a private message to squire Aug 25 2010, 9:43pm
                Well, I did wonder about the horse... FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Aug 25 2010, 10:00pm
    Response the money question Hyarmendacil Send a private message to Hyarmendacil Aug 27 2010, 12:54am
        So you think there was money Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 27 2010, 2:26am
            Money Hyarmendacil Send a private message to Hyarmendacil Aug 27 2010, 3:03am
                It's still a choice Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 27 2010, 12:39pm
                    "Fact"? squire Send a private message to squire Aug 27 2010, 2:49pm
                        I'm sorry, the Shire and Bree are not feudal. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 27 2010, 3:17pm
                            Stick to your guns! squire Send a private message to squire Aug 27 2010, 10:24pm
                                Dirty pool! Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 27 2010, 11:07pm
                            Agreeing with Curious... Desicon9 Send a private message to Desicon9 Aug 27 2010, 11:55pm
                                Disagreeing with Curious ... Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 28 2010, 12:17am
                                    If nuttin' can be known, what are we talking fer? LOL! Desicon9 Send a private message to Desicon9 Aug 28 2010, 2:08am
                                        Arguably, Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 28 2010, 3:10am
                                            The Muster of Rohan Elizabeth Send a private message to Elizabeth Aug 28 2010, 3:33am
                                                They didn't spend three days on it Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 28 2010, 4:04am
                                        The Shire and Breeland were not Feudal Hyarmendacil Send a private message to Hyarmendacil Aug 29 2010, 9:22pm
                                More on Middle Earth economics Hyarmendacil Send a private message to Hyarmendacil Aug 29 2010, 8:52pm
                                    "Don't go there." Elizabeth Send a private message to Elizabeth Aug 29 2010, 10:24pm
                                    How One Thing Leads to Another... Desicon9 Send a private message to Desicon9 Aug 30 2010, 1:54pm
                                        Dangerous indeed sador Send a private message to sador Aug 30 2010, 3:01pm
                                            Curious gender... Desicon9 Send a private message to Desicon9 Aug 30 2010, 5:35pm
                                                No problem. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 30 2010, 11:47pm
                                        If I may suggest a roadmap squire Send a private message to squire Aug 30 2010, 3:35pm
                                            Precising definitions; and valid "speculations." Desicon9 Send a private message to Desicon9 Aug 30 2010, 7:28pm
                                            Hmmmm Tim Send a private message to Tim Aug 30 2010, 8:28pm
                                            I wonder if Mordor and its slave colonies Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 30 2010, 11:45pm
                                                The Aztecs were a stretch squire Send a private message to squire Aug 31 2010, 12:45am
                                                    I feel quite sure Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 31 2010, 1:27am
                                                    Points of view FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Sep 2 2010, 9:22am
                                                        Now there's a bit of fan fiction for you. Curious Send a private message to Curious Sep 2 2010, 12:19pm
                                                            Only Sam FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Sep 2 2010, 1:28pm
                                                                Wait... squire Send a private message to squire Sep 2 2010, 2:08pm
                                                                    It can be depended on FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Sep 2 2010, 2:43pm
                                                                I think maybe Squire is concerned with fan fic history revisionism Tim Send a private message to Tim Sep 2 2010, 2:58pm
                                                        Texts giving Mordor's side of the question squire Send a private message to squire Sep 2 2010, 2:03pm
                                                            And Sauron speaking to Pippin in the Palantir CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Sep 2 2010, 4:23pm
                                                                Yes, for what it's worth. squire Send a private message to squire Sep 2 2010, 5:05pm
                                                                    Sauron's diction vs. his boss's; who is more menacing? CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Sep 3 2010, 12:15am
                                                                        Sauron speaks like a hobbit! Curious Send a private message to Curious Sep 3 2010, 12:26am
                                                                            It's a function of who's translating. Elizabeth Send a private message to Elizabeth Sep 3 2010, 12:52am
                                                                            Sauron is the only bad guy who speaks Hobbit CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Sep 4 2010, 9:34pm
                                                                                The difference may be... Elizabeth Send a private message to Elizabeth Sep 4 2010, 9:40pm
                                                            Yes well FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Sep 2 2010, 5:43pm
                                                                I think you've hit on it Tim Send a private message to Tim Sep 2 2010, 5:59pm
                                                                The Ring Spell is Sauron's composition squire Send a private message to squire Sep 2 2010, 6:39pm
                                                                    I know! ;-) FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Sep 2 2010, 8:49pm
                                                                        It's possible, I guess squire Send a private message to squire Sep 2 2010, 11:35pm
                                                                            Ha! And you say you don't like fan fiction! Curious Send a private message to Curious Sep 2 2010, 11:52pm
                                                                            I am Tim Send a private message to Tim Sep 3 2010, 12:44am
                                                                            That's it! FarFromHome Send a private message to FarFromHome Sep 3 2010, 9:05am
                                                                Celebrimbor heard those lines, didn't he? CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Sep 2 2010, 7:24pm
                                                            In 'Mount Doom' sador Send a private message to sador Sep 2 2010, 7:43pm
                                        Did Tolkien ever think LOTR economics could be recovered? Desicon9 Send a private message to Desicon9 Aug 31 2010, 1:38am
                                            Tolkien talks quite a bit about economics in The Hobbit. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 31 2010, 4:19am
                                                Weak feudalism; more on money; Shire princes CuriousG Send a private message to CuriousG Aug 31 2010, 1:34pm
                                    That's a great insight! Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 30 2010, 9:58pm
                    Cultures in The Hobbit Elizabeth Send a private message to Elizabeth Aug 27 2010, 11:24pm
                        It's not a matter of inconsistency. Curious Send a private message to Curious Aug 27 2010, 11:56pm

 
 
 

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