squire
Half-elven
Jul 15 2012, 1:40pm
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Now that's what I call the *beginnings* of a critical approach that we can talk about
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Tolkien's prose style, ... veers alarmingly between windbaggery, archness, pomposity, and achieves something like humanity, and ordinary English, only in the parts about hobbits, the little people who are our representatives in the saga to a far greater degree than its grandly heroic (or snivellingly crooked) men."- Salman Rushdie Now there's some criticism we can get our teeth into. I would love to help Rushdie be more specific with some examples of the poor prose he so gleefully scants. Strictly, I guess, we would have to restrict ourselves to the narrator's prose, since any author is justified in making his characters into windbags, snobs, and buffoons. Although perhaps I'm misreading - perhaps Rushdie is saying that Tolkien tried to write noble heroes, endearing protagonists, and threatening villains, and with his surpassingly trite style produced only a slobbering rank of fools instead. Well, we would want to avoid the "parts about hobbits", of which Rushdie approves. For a start, I would guess that Rushdie dislikes the written dialogue of: Elrond, Strider/Aragorn, Gandalf, Galadriel, Eomer, Theoden, Saruman, Wormtongue, Denethor, Eowyn and the like. I also wonder if he doesn't find Tolkien's descriptions of the cities, fortresses, battles, and past history of Middle-earth "alarmingly" overblown and lacking in "humanity". I can't tell if he includes in this indictment Tolkien's nature-writing: the rich and loving descriptions of the landforms, waterways, weather, and passage of time that so fill in my sense of Middle-earth as a living, breathing world. Tolkien's vocabulary alone in these passages may disqualify him from meeting Rushdie's demand for "ordinary English" in the writing of the story. I also don't know if Rushdie includes in his indictment those Men who are to my mind neither heroic nor crooked: Bombadil, Butterbur, Beregond, and Ghan-buri-ghan, for instance; not to mention those hobbits who are demonstrably windbags like the Gaffer, Bilbo, and Farmer Maggot. I'm also guessing that Rushdie is among those whom Shelob's Appetite has identified as disliking the story once it reaches Rivendell, when the hobbits are absorbed into the longer quest for Mt. Doom and the War of the Ring that entangles it. Interestingly, as I read History of Middle-earth, it was between Rivendell and Moria that Tolkien himself recognized that his story was outgrowing the "New Hobbit" garments he originally dressed it in. He later went back and rewrote much of the first book (hobbits, hobbits, hobbits!) to adjust it to the darker and more epic tone that the story as a whole assumed in the subsequent years of writing. In fact, as Rushdie acknowledges, the story became a "saga"; and surely a saga, or perhaps "romance" as Tolkien fancied it, must try for the "grandly heroic", which Rushdie grants that he achieved. Since he doesn't elaborate, it seems hard to say what prose style Rushdie thinks a modern saga should be written in - especially the parts without the imaginary miniature humans.
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