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Ruxendil_Thoorg
Tol Eressea

Mar 23 2012, 1:44pm


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Thank you for sharing that Eledhwen!

I enjoyed that very much!

I happened to write my version of One Day More last night before reading yours, just to see how similar they would be. It appears I was right, we made similar choices.

I like your Master of the House approach better than what I originally had in mind. i laughed along Smile

Here are my versions of One Day More and Castle on a Cloud (abridged...I might add to it later for an "extended edition" to include the rest of the scene) [disclaimer: these are "drafts" that I wrote yesterday and today only]

first we have ....

Calas Galedhon (Castle on a Cloud from Les Miserables) (I wrote it this morning...its just a draft)

(The Fellowship has been allowed to enter Lothlorien blindfolded.)

HALDIR

We go to Calas Galedhon

Until we're there you may not see

Blindfolds for all your Company

That is the rule in Lorien.

GIMLI

There is a thing called courtesy
There is a thing our Elf hosts lack!

ARAGORN (to GIMLI)

Now, that was hardly courtesy

(TO HALDIR)

Please pardon my gruff companion.

(They arrive)

GIMLI

Who is that lady all in light?

FRODO

I think she's speaking in mind...!

LEGOLAS

She's nice to see....

BOROMIR

But she frightens much.

GIMLI

What's this I feel? I love her very much.


GALADRIEL

Yours is a path that saw one more


CELEBORN

Where is the wizard?

ARAGORN

He has died.

LEGOLAS

Balrog of Morgoth pulled him down

ARAGORN

Ere we reached here, fair Lorien.


[to be continued in a "Special Extended Edition" if I manage to get to it]



And next we have....

ONE DAY MORDOR (One Day More, from Les Miserables)

(One day before Siege of Gondor. Arwen expects to sail West next day. Aragorn is about to take the Paths of the Dead. Frodo and Sam follow Gollum up the long stair to Cirith Ungol. Faramir has left Osgiliath to Gothmog and returns to report to Denethor. In Minas Tirith, Denethor sits lost in his grief over Boromirís death. Gothmog prepares to lead his Orc army as part of Mordorís assault upon the White City.)

GANDALF

One day more
Another day until the coming ruin

FRODO

This never ending road to Oroduin...

SAM

The Stinker's actin' awful sly, I'd say its just an alibi...

GANDALF

One day more....

ARAGORN (to ARWEN in his thoughts)

I did not live before we met
How can I live if we are parted?

GANDALF

One day more....

ARAGORN & ARWEN

Tomorrow we'll be worlds away
But when we met our world had started

EOWYN

One more day I'm on my own

ARAGORN & ARWEN

Will we ever meet again?

EOWYN

One more day of him not caring

ARAGORN & ARWEN

I was born to be with you!

EOWYN

What a life I might have known

ARAGORN & ARWEN

And I swear I will be true!

EOWYN

But he never saw me there

GOTHMOG

One more day before the storm!

FARAMIR

Was it wise to let them go?

GOTHMOG

We'll have Man obliterated!

FARAMIR

To defy my father's will?

GOTHMOG

When their ranks begin to fall

FARAMIR

Do I follow him still?

GOTHMOG

Age of Orc will come to be!

MEN OF MINAS TIRITH and ORCS OF MORDOR

The time is now the day is here!

GANDALF

One day more!!!!

DENETHOR

One more day of no solution
Hope lies withered in the bud
I will join the kings of heathens
Ere the world is drowned in blood

GOLLUM

Watch 'em climbing up
Trick 'em so they fall
Wicked tricksy Bagginses will pay for all
Here a little dip, there a little touch
Soon we takes the precious, no, it won't take much!

MEN OF MINAS TIRITH

One day to a new beginning....

OATHBREAKERS

Where's the sword we rally ' round?

MEN OF MINAS TIRITH

The returning of our king...?

OATHBREAKERS

The returning of the king...?

MEN OF MINAS TIRITH

There's a Fourth Age for the winning....

OATHBREAKERS

There's a curse to be undone!

MEN OF MINAS TIRITH

Do you hear the Morgul din?

ARAGORN

The sword is here, now what say you???

GANDALF

One day more!!!

ARAGORN

I bid you stand, Men of the Dead!

EOWYN

One more day fighting on my own!

FRODO

Here at the end of all things started...

DENETHOR(overlapping)

I will build a pyre of heathens
None shall follow where I go
Save for Faramir, I'll save him
From the sorrows he might know

GANDALF

One day more!

GOTHMOG

Tomorrow they'll be wiped away!

EOWYN

What a life I might have known!

SAM

We've come so close! Be not downhearted.

DENETHOR(overlapping)

One more day of no solution
Hope dies withered in the bud
We'll get ready, bring more oil, boys!

GOLLUM (overlapping)

Watch 'em climbing up
Trick 'em so they fall
Wicked tricksy Bagginses will pay for all

GANDALF

Tomorrow isn't far away,
Tomorrow will be judgement day

ALL

Tomorrow we'll discover what Eru
in Aman has in store!
One more dawn?
One more day
One day mo-
O-o-o-ore!

A bag is like a hole that you can carry with you.

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(This post was edited by Ruxendil_Thoorg on Mar 23 2012, 1:50pm)


Edit Log:
Post edited by Ruxendil_Thoorg (Tol Eressea) on Mar 23 2012, 1:46pm
Post edited by Ruxendil_Thoorg (Tol Eressea) on Mar 23 2012, 1:48pm
Post edited by Ruxendil_Thoorg (Tol Eressea) on Mar 23 2012, 1:50pm


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